Favorite Shoes

A rising, young starlet named Ruth,
Unaware that it was uncouth,
Wore sneakers and socks
With her formal frocks,
‘Til Miss Manners taught her the truth.

Designers now over their shocks,
Are thinking quite out of the box.
Though they are annoyed,
They are duly employed
Sewing diamonds on argyle socks.


For Carolyn's Ccontest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Nance Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Hahaha . I would wear them! That is good, I like it :) hugs
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 12:15 AM
How cute this is, Joyce. I heard you had a really great birthday bash. Congrats on both this and your birthday.
Roper Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 9:15 PM
Congratulations on your great well written win, Joyce, :) enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
Williams Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 7:49 AM
This is a very interesting and funny limerick, Joyce!! :) Congratulations on your high placement in the contest with this clever piece! All my very best to you always. :) Bartholomew
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 4:52 PM
many congrats Joyce:-) hugs jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Hey, there may really BE some trendy designer out there sewing diamonds on argyle socks! CONGRATS, Joyce! This is a GREAT limerick. Janice
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July 16, 2018 at 11:13 AM
Great work, Joyce. Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn (Lines eight and nine should have the same syllable count.)
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November 7, 2011 at 10:31 PM
JOYCE..CONGRATULATIONS ~ IN THE SHOE CONTEST... I THINK every title is aweome.. ;-) Have a wonderful NIGHT, GOD BLESS,..P.D.
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November 7, 2011 at 9:08 AM
Congrats Joyce on a magnificent win with this excellent entry in the Shoes contest luv..
Taylor Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Congrats, Joyce. Very humorous. Great job. Nice going, girl. All the best. luv Ralph
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November 6, 2011 at 10:39 PM
JOYCE~ SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY~ CONGRATULATIONS!~ in my shoe contest~LUV*SKAT
La France Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 6:24 AM
I have seen it, and if done right, looks very good, loved your limericks, just wonderful, and I hope it wins in the contest~~
Fraser Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 9:01 AM
Wonderful Limerick series Joyce, good luck in the contest....:)
Mehta Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 12:59 PM
Very interesting and witty write, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Well as long as the socks have diamonds sewn onto them, I guess that would put the fashion police at bay, Joyce. Had a great laugh reading this -- I'm no rising starlet, but this girl and I have similar tastes in attire. Soup mail in a moment, dear. Love, Carolyn
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February 5, 2011 at 12:01 PM
Yep that is exactly what they do when told they look bad, they just rebel and make it fashion! Some of the things passing for fashion. YUK!! Good one, joyce. LUv ,Andrea
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February 5, 2011 at 10:58 AM
Very good entry Joyce, so enjoyed your Limerick on this rainy (Not Snowing) NY day...luv Michael
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