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    Pick a Title Vol. 39      Sponsor: Edward Ibeh        October 4, 2023

Walking down a forsaken road will often lead to mourning Life offers no guarantee of happiness. There is no warning that in dark places, there lurks a wicked demon, spawning temptations before us. We should reject him with scorning Never make a deal with the bird catcher who lies in wait He'll know your weakness and cast a line with lure and bait He knows you wear no armor, nor a protective breastplate impregnable enough to prevent him from sealing your fate Faust, the fool, sold his soul to the devil in return for power It was an unwise pact from which any Christian should cower But the need for greed causes a heart to be cold and dour unable to repel the diabolical one's angry stare; his glower Flee from the serpent's talons, close your ears to his flatters or you will discover your life torn apart in pieces and tatters Too late to right your wrongs when your whole world shatters Before bargaining with the devil, think about what matters Selling your soul will do you in. Sin will lead to your doom with you trapped in his cage; a burning hell with fiery plume Don't be like Faust, faltering when choosing power to consume Turn your back on the wicked beast or live your life in gloom Stay your hand from signing your soul into the pit of hell Raise your defenses, unlike greedy Faust, who long ago fell into the clutches of evil when his integrity he decided to sell so, the dooms day bell will not be pealing your death knell

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Date: 10/15/2023 8:18:00 PM
A superb mono rhyme, Lin, wise counsel all would do well to follow, warmest congratulations on your win!
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/22/2023 4:15:00 PM
Hi Seeker and thank you very much.
Date: 10/15/2023 9:34:00 AM
Lin, this is a brilliant Monorhyme. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/22/2023 4:14:00 PM
Thanks ever so much for honoring my poem with a win, Edward.
Date: 10/6/2023 6:31:00 AM
You have written wonderfully on this, Lin:) great rhymes used:)
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/6/2023 6:35:00 AM
G'morning, Jo and thank you so sincerely for leaving your generous thoughts.
Date: 10/5/2023 7:18:00 AM
beautifully written. fav. I’m impressed. Hope you’re doing well. I just put up a new poem. All the best.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/5/2023 7:28:00 AM
Good morning, Maurice. I'm pleased you enjoyed reading my take on the bad decision to make a deal with the devil. Nothing good ever comes from his temptation. Thank you, and I WILL read your new post.
Date: 10/4/2023 9:42:00 AM
Awesome rhyme scheme...took a great deal of patience to create this one, Lin. Yes, selling our soul to anyone, especially the devil, will always be our undoing. Had to read Faust when I was in college. I was young and naive at the time and struggled. The story has a timeless message as does your poem. Well done!
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/4/2023 9:53:00 AM
Merci, merci, Sara. There is much we cannot possibly understand at such a young age, or that we'd desire to contemplate. When life is there for the plucking, we want only to harvest the ripest fruit, not think about the price that must be paid for making a such a bargain. At 20, most are not even sure the devil exists. I'm always glad to read your insightful thoughts. Thanks!
Date: 10/4/2023 8:12:00 AM
Lin, I love the usage of what may be archaic words to some. My thoughts turn to the Berlioz opera of the damnation of the one you have named. I'll turn on my turntable and read this write again. Thanks
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/4/2023 9:49:00 AM
but it need not be at the price the devil demands
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/4/2023 9:00:00 AM
Telle est la mort
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/4/2023 8:15:00 AM
Please do and thank you, Jeff. La Damnation?

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