Get Your Premium Membership

Fatherless

When a household is fatherless desperation drips from weathered eaves the children tend to grow wild as weeds slipping from rambunctious into mischievous.. People dismiss it as a faze-to be outgrown in time but it often cascades into crime after crime they do a little bit of time after time years slipping by into the bin of wasted lives. My country is much like a fatherless household.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/13/2023 3:20:00 PM
A dooming, surprise ending! Nicely written. Thanks for placing my interview poem number one! Super honored!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/12/2023 8:06:00 AM
wow, such a powerful poem, and a fave for me as well as for Panagiota. And while I am here, thanks for the second place in your contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/11/2023 5:09:00 PM
The connection between children raised without a father and crime is as truthful as it is sad... but for political reasons... no one wants to touch it. Such are the times we live in, Stay well my friend.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/23/2023 2:58:00 AM
A fave, Anthony So well done, Panagiota
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs