Fatherless

When a household is fatherless, desperation drips from weathered eaves.
The children tend to grow wild as weeds. 
Slipping from rambunctious into mischievous.
People dismiss it as a phase to be outgrown in time.
But it often cascades into crime after crime.

They do a little bit of time after time.
Years wiggling by into the bin of wasted lives.

My country is much like a fatherless household.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Caliri Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 3:20 PM
A dooming, surprise ending! Nicely written. Thanks for placing my interview poem number one! Super honored!
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 8:06 AM
wow, such a powerful poem, and a fave for me as well as for Panagiota. And while I am here, thanks for the second place in your contest.
Mchattie Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 5:09 PM
The connection between children raised without a father and crime is as truthful as it is sad... but for political reasons... no one wants to touch it. Such are the times we live in, Stay well my friend.
Romios Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 2:58 AM
A fave, Anthony So well done, Panagiota
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