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Robert J. Lindley, Sept, 26th, 1979
Sonnet, (Fate Insures That Even Mighty Kings Fall)

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Total # Syllables: 168
Total # Words: 126

Fate's Wicked Black Hand And Its Long Sharp Sword As withdrawn sword shows its reds and gashed side aches so horror's hand is shown in colors that are vibrant, within swirling shadows and their flesh flaying blows echo black curses and cuts that are redundant. As this rampaging world, crashes upon the weak innocent souls walk into nights of wanton sins, oft embracing evil with relish, stench that reeks with no thought to stop or ever make true amends. When it seems Fate's granite mountains tumble on down falling to crush blind masses and drink flowing blood, safely away have flown those with their golden crowns into havens far from the poor they see as crude. Yet even mighty Kings can not flee Fate's true wrath as dark deeds insure miseries lay in their path. Robert J. Lindley, Sept, 26th, 1979, as was written -no new edits Sonnet, (Fate Insures That Even Mighty Kings Fall)

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Date: 7/27/2018 9:03:00 AM
what goes around will return....even the smallest flicker can extremely burn....every lie will one day succumb to the truth....you don't believe me? bill cosby is proof....digging in dirt will leave you soiled....sparing the rod ensures the child will be spoiled....very profound and powerful words mr Robert....
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Date: 7/25/2018 4:44:00 PM
A dark sonnet, and one written so many years a go.. great choice of words used in this one...
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Date: 7/25/2018 8:38:00 AM
We all will face it to some degree ... Some more than others ... Very much a true write... All the best Robert
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Date: 7/24/2018 11:36:00 PM
Lovely dark sonnet Robert and how right are your words that with fate mighty kings fall, we see it all to often,, the list is endless. Tom
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Date: 7/24/2018 9:19:00 PM
Dear Robert, your amazing sonnet is a deep, dark beauty expressed with vibrant evil imagery of corruption and ultimately Fate's wrathful judgement. Karma comes to all evildoers. A splendid poem showing that a black heart begets a black hand. Thrilling dark poetry my wonderful friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/24/2018 6:27:00 PM
You've really written some dark drama. If someone should read this going down that path, it might change their direction. Great poetry.
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