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Fate, Is But a Journey

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I have traveled a long, twisted road to the here and now, and I am unsure and hesitate as to where my life is going; I have lamented so much death and wept at being left behind. Oh, what is my destiny? What is my serendipity? Is it in the stars? What does fate have in store for me? Time is clicking away, perhaps, I can make my own destiny- no matter how precarious; it is never to late to begin new, each moment is a new beginning, so, I will take one faltering step after another, even when I fall. _______________________ June 25, 2018 Poetry/Prose/Fate, Is But A Journey Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1034-828-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Eight Line of Fate, When you wonder if it is too late sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 7/21/2018 11:28:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. Well done! Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/21/2018 10:52:00 PM
Wow, exquisitely penned, BW DH. Line xx
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Date: 7/21/2018 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great poem about fate. Encouraging and hopeful. Well done!
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Date: 7/20/2018 1:29:00 PM
Constance, what a terrific poem and a well deserved win. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/19/2018 2:37:00 PM
Ahh, this is a really wonderful and inspiring write,you are right, instead of giving up, we should try again and again till fate herself gets tired and impress by our courage get forced to let us succeed, many congratulations on your win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:41:00 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:35:00 AM
You are right it is a journey and one we cant control sometimes.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/27/2018 12:02:00 PM
Wonderful verse, Broken Wings .... luck in the contest
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Date: 6/27/2018 9:11:00 AM
I love this poem. So well done, Broken Wings. Adding it to my favorites. // Warren:)
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Date: 6/26/2018 8:39:00 AM
Lovely eloquently laid words. My best to you in the contest Constance :) xomo
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Date: 6/25/2018 8:36:00 PM
Skinned knees and all, keep trekking! <3 Kim
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:40:00 PM
Positive vibes...encouraging to walk in faith...All the best BW
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