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Fate Full Dancers

Him Standing Waiting for The right moment To ask her If she'll Dance Her Waiting Hoping that He has courage So he won't Run from Fate He watches She looks up A subtle smile his heart skips ----It's his Time Three Words said "Shall we dance?" She says "Gladly." His heart grows Twice the Size

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Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/1/2013 8:30:00 AM

Anticipation, dread, fear, desire, longing, all rolled into an amazing poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2013 9:28:00 AM

Thanks Montery, I am in awe of your flour sack poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2013 1:23:00 AM

this is so cute, Richard. And the reason I have not been on here. We were visiting our son's little family in Oregon. It's nice to be back though as much as I enjoyed the brief trip!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2013 8:14:00 AM

Welcome back Andrea, so glad you enjoyed the trip. I just got back from Vegas so I as well did not have much time on the soup.

Ken Carroll

Date: 11/29/2013 4:52:00 PM

Hi Richard, I enjoyed this nice ballroom write..thanks for the visit to my verse.. Ken

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/29/2013 4:54:00 PM

My pleasure Ken

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/29/2013 11:36:00 AM

Richard.......loved your visits. Happy you are home safe and sound. Lovely poem! The usual fare from you! I love to dance. This is sweet. Take care.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/29/2013 2:45:00 PM

Good to know you care! :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/29/2013 11:38:00 AM

Thanks Eileen, I was a bit worried about you.