Fate

Fate had led them to the sea Where they ventured into the murky deep To view the wreck of a ship so great On a mission with mysteries to keep But then something went wrong And all communication was lost A frantic search has begun To rescue them at any cost But time is running out And they have yet to be found Everyone hopes and prays they will be rescued So they can get back on solid ground ----

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/12/2023 8:48:00 PM

We are just puppets of the fate ! Yet we have to try our best and struggle life long Nicely composed Blessings

Valsa George

Date: 7/11/2023 10:36:00 PM

Unfortunately our prayers didn't get an answer ! They were fated to die in the deep depths of the ocean. It was so tragic. Another chapter added to the tragedy of Titanic ! Beautifully penned dear Joseph !

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/10/2023 11:08:00 AM

Hi Joseph well penned my friend and such a sad end to 5 eager oceanic explorers looking for more answers to relate about the Titanic. You are quite right - It was their fate, and the fate of their bereaved families, we listened every night with hope until the sad day the World found out about the implosion. Congratulations on your win. Blessing galore, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/27/2023 12:14:00 PM

- Back with Congratulations, Joseph :) - I "lost the "F" ... theme" - hugs

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/25/2023 1:05:00 PM

This is such a sad memory of what happened to the Titan. A disaster that did not have to happen...the irony is startling too. Well chosen wording for this lost crew.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/24/2023 11:57:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading it again. So Sad How it Ended. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 6/24/2023 4:44:00 AM

wunderbar write loved reading your work ...blessings

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/23/2023 10:24:00 PM

A very beautiful writing on the concept of hope. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/23/2023 7:36:00 PM

Joseph, Heartfelt congratulations on your podium contest win with this lovely poem. Blessings

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/23/2023 12:38:00 PM

A wonderful write on a very sad story. Money cannot buy somethings. Life is one of them. Have a blessed day...................

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/22/2023 7:19:00 AM

Interesting Joseph. I haven't seen the full story on this. Hopefully, they are found :)

Joseph May
Date: 6/22/2023 1:11:00 PM

Sadly they did not make it Heidi

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/21/2023 6:52:00 PM

Yes, I've heard about this and I'm hoping they are found. So sad indeed, what has happened. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. My best to you, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 6/22/2023 1:09:00 PM

It has been determined that an implosion caused a total loss of life