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Fate

we had a life plan but fate took it away your name is in cold stone ______________________ August 25, 2020 Poetry/Monoku/fate Copyright Protected, ID 08-1304-276-25 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, Mon-O sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 11/14/20 Honorable Mention

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/22/2020 9:52:00 AM

Oh, the sad beauty of your imagery grips my heart, Constance. Heartbreaking irony so poignantly expressed. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2020 4:20:00 PM

Susan, thank you for your compassion and congratulations _Constance

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/17/2020 8:29:00 AM

Ouch. That is beautiful ...

Constance La France
Date: 11/17/2020 8:48:00 AM

Kai, thanks so much for the beautiful _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2020 2:09:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Constance :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 11/17/2020 7:41:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2020 3:19:00 PM

Congrats, Constance. Sublimely sad one.

Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2020 3:25:00 PM

Andrea, thanks so much for the congrats, oh I like that word sublimely ! _Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2020 1:43:00 PM

Coming back to say congrats. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2020 3:26:00 PM

Sara, thanks for the congrats, appreciate _Constance

Alkas Poetry

Date: 11/15/2020 12:27:00 AM

We plan life as if it would last forever ... but the hand of destiny everything twists... salute alkas

Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2020 3:32:00 AM

Alkas, thanks for visiting, yes, it seems the best way is to life for the moment _Constance

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/14/2020 11:42:00 AM

The irony of life lives in your lines my friend and in your beating heart. Congratulations. Sending you a bounty of blessings!

Constance La France
Date: 11/14/2020 11:47:00 AM

Sam, thank you for the congratulations and the message, yes, no matter how much we plan, there is a plan written, a destiny we cannot change _Constance

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/14/2020 8:16:00 AM

Hi BW, Such a sad and heartfelt one-liner. I’m sorry for your loss- Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 11/14/2020 11:48:00 AM

Alexis, thank you for visiting my poem, yes, this is the knife in my heart that bleeds forever and ever _Constance