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Fast, a Fool

Oh enigma ...
Endless hours of twilight-daubed magic -

Enchanting walks 'side a moon-splattered sea,
Alight with silver doubloon wave-tops that mock the starry vault,

Toes pressed to the cool, pearly-soft hem of sand,
Imparting each other our deepest notions and dearest aims.

Then ... made a joke to your friends,
Grand laughs over drinks.

Oh paradox ...
Countless midday meadows, abounding -

Hazy summer days where tall goldenrod and foxglove
Curtsied the breeze above our bare backsides,

As if in honor of the sublime, tender, soul-sharing love we made
In the sweet, supple grasses that wove our blanket ...

Hot, breathy moans lost to the buzz of honeybees and hoppers.
Then ... made but a farce in passing,

A casual remark twisted for the sake of giggles.
Oh ambiguity ...

All those preciously amazing romantic escapades -
Priceless moments rare and real, that so few ever get to know ...

Made but fodder for your careless ego ... and I your fool.
Worst of all? I would do it ALL ... again.






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Polarities And Paradoxes" Poetry Contest, Line Gauthier, Judge & Sponsor.
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La France Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 9:52 AM
Greg, congratulations on your first place win in Line's contest with this beautiful write _Constance
Watt Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 5:30 PM
G- a paradox within an ambiguity wrapped in an enigma... such is love. But we do it all again. Congrats on your breathy, enchanting win, friend ~ John
Hamilton Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 2:42 PM
Another mesmerizing write G, congrats, I see this is a winner!
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 1:27 PM
Congrats on your win! Very colourful! Well done!
Gauthier Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 9:37 AM
Loved your poem, Gregory.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 7:24 AM
You move us from lovely imagery to time spent with friends...love that! Beautiful as always, dear friend!
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