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Farside Otherworldly Lovers - - Dedicated to Rick Keeble, you asked for it

He was howling at the moon,
it was mid June's heyday, she
was naive beyond reproach
her innocently lit chiaroscuro 
made him hunger all the more,
til one day she let down her guard
'neath an impatient violaceous sky
drinking effervescently blissed wine 
kissed him with rosé  blushed lips 
 
But his instincts betrayed him,
devouring the petite blossom
of her youth, teeth bared,
eyes glaring crimson, her stardust smile
no deterrent, appetite’s salacious intent,
stomach growling nocturnal desires,
claws scarring milk-paint skin
till groans released vibrations
felt ‘pon shadowed earth
shattering movements
 
ground-breaking momentum
sent horizons a' rocking
motioning to constellations
as they synchronously liquefied
tilting  universes' on their axis  
a little death's furtherance 
uttering god's hallelujahs 
lit beyond obscure sighs
 
Now two silhouettes,
midst harmonious moaning
 echo upon auras' illusions
   cresting lofty hilltops
can be seen this night and all others
when the skies turn dark
and  celestial bodies'  tumult
simultaneously ignite thunder,
diffusing smatterings' explicit 
flight surrendered furthermost 
 heart-stricken otherworldly lovers

  
'Collaboration ~ Chris Green & Paloma'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/11/2016 9:33:00 AM
Wow, wow, wow..... I love this much! 7 and favourite!
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Date: 11/10/2016 4:05:00 PM
Fabulous collab, Paloma. You and Chris are quite the romantic poetic duo. Both of youse did justice to Rick. A scary love poem? Anywho, it was a thrilling read. Love and joy to you. RW
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Date: 11/10/2016 7:01:00 AM
Great write to both of you. Intense desire that could only be defined by a new constellation created to always remind us of their forever love affair.
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Date: 11/10/2016 5:12:00 AM
Lovely collaboration by two awesome poets:) beautiful:)
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Date: 11/9/2016 5:32:00 PM
I knew both of you would be good together, such a great dance you have both performed. The Awen clearly shines brightly from both of you in this piece. Brilliantly done. You are both excellent poets. O, by the way, I like your new avatar Paloma, you are a very attractive lass.
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Date: 11/9/2016 7:29:00 PM
Was hoping we'd pass your test! It was a fun adventure writing with the romance virtuoso Chris. Many thanks Rick, now where's yours? :)
Date: 11/9/2016 3:58:00 PM
Very well done! :)
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Paloma P
Date: 11/9/2016 7:25:00 PM
Thanks Heidi. :)
Date: 11/9/2016 3:51:00 PM
A truly excellent collaboration; loved both the content and poetic language...and the image of "her innocently lit chiaroscuro". // paul
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Paloma P
Date: 11/9/2016 7:25:00 PM
Thanks Paul, thrilled you enjoyed our collaboration.
Date: 11/9/2016 1:01:00 PM
You're productivity is exquisite. I enjoy all the reads. Keep up the great work.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/9/2016 2:46:00 PM
Thanks very much Frank, must give credit to my awesome collaborator Chris Green also.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/9/2016 2:35:00 PM
Thanks very much Frank, must give credit to my awesome collaborator Chris Green also.
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Date: 11/9/2016 2:35:00 PM
Thanks very much Frank, must give credit to my awesome collaborator Chris Green also.