Farrah, Bronze Huntress

fine, faintly flickering face,
 a goddess' gilded grimace;
  eyes sharp, slightly squinting,
   lips pursed, concentrating;
    arms strained, straight, steady,
     inch by inch, pulling in the cord,
      pushing away at the sturdy bow
       that bends so slowly in, arched.


deft fingers firmly clasp,
 but ever so lithely guide
  the lethal arrow's feather
   past her cheek near the ear;
    pulls hard, stretches taut
     and tense the bare bowstring,
      impatiently anticipating,
       savoring the inner, aching thrill;


waiting for just the right time,
 but waiting forever, it seems;
  the prized prey, still out there
   feeding freely on freedom still;
    her destiny, chiseled, shaped
     by her sculptor's whiffling whim,
      is to forever take a careful aim,
       but never to make the final kill!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 3:27 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Romeo and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 9:31 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 1:54 PM
Wherefore art thou, Romeo? In Round Two with this great poem! Congratulations! Merry Christmas, Carolyn
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December 20, 2009 at 11:45 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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December 3, 2009 at 12:42 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 4:55 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Romeo. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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November 30, 2009 at 1:24 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Romeo >> James
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November 30, 2009 at 6:08 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 5:20 AM
So very true Romeo but it was not for lack of trying. Awesome writing. Thank you. Love, Carol
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