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Farewell South Carolina

Never will I see pine trees, or dream of whistling wind in leaves, hear the moaning of the trains in lonely nighttime southern rains. Sunshine wakes a cross at morn. Unsatisfied, I rise at dawn. Moving to instinct unknown, once claimed this foreign place my home. Long ago, I dreamed of dance, heightened form of black romance. Remnants of the hopes so lost, yea our future was the cost. A house that stands yet vacant still, resting on yond massacre hill, you cared not that we would be him and her in house, so free. Your mind has gone too far beyond, places where the lost are fond. Rest in peace with hopes absurd. "I loved you once" an action word. 6/22/2022

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Date: 9/6/2022 4:26:00 AM
Hauntingly beautiful! What a talent you have!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 9/21/2022 8:44:00 AM
Thank you P.S.
Date: 7/19/2022 11:28:00 PM
Oh Janis, this poem is so moving and beautiful it brought tears to my eyes. This is the kind of poetry that is passed down through the ages to be cherished and repeated. Another Fave for me. You are an excellent poet and your poetry always inspires me. Hugs and Blessings xxoo
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/20/2022 6:34:00 PM
Thanks much for your encouragement and positive remarks. I was so encouraged I wrote today after a long time. May you have blessings and favor.

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