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Fare Thee Well

Last summer we flew kites like they were rocket ships in the sky. You died- indigo clouds cried; now my lonely string weeps... you were pain and torment personified. We used to watch medallion leaves burn in autumn, smelling the blazing embers of yesterday’s memories. You died- crimson grieves inside; now my lungs miss your fervent scent… pushed your fears aside. "Intensely we tarried through lavender fields, reminiscing upon carefree youthful dreams- using broken barren branches as playful shields, strolling around the river bank streams. I heard the silence, I counted the screams, now not even the pangs of conscience yields." Fare thee well my brilliant bright star, I watched you fade into the universe’s nothingness. You died- constellations crashed the tide; now my black-holed heart mourns… since you committed suicide. New Poems Only Poetry Contest 24 lines total in this poem Emile Pinet April 12, 2018

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Date: 4/18/2018 5:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartbreaking poem of life-shattering pain. A deep emotional poem well written and sure to help others. Does me.
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Date: 4/16/2018 4:19:00 PM
it is an endless pain this heartless arrow tearing through innocence. Well done Laura, congrats on your placement.
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Date: 4/16/2018 1:58:00 PM
Back with most deserved congrats, Laura. Love it.
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Date: 4/16/2018 12:49:00 PM
Wonderfully expressed Luloo! Congratulations on your high placement! : )
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Date: 4/16/2018 11:21:00 AM
Excellent like always congratulations on your win!!!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/16/2018 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations Laura! Your amazing poem has placed in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 4/12/2018 9:36:00 AM
What a beautiful gut wrenching read but so artfully executed. Wow, Laura. Exquisite.
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