Fantasy Dreaming

What will my fantasy dreamt be, while dreaming? My soul vulnerable, uncovered, open, revealed So many sweet places kept secret from the living Dreams, I keep hidden in a box and sealed I push myself past the mist, the clouds and haze My soul vulnerable, uncovered, open, revealed My fantasy lover, beautiful with his eyes ablaze It is the night, deep with velvet, rich darkness I push myself past the mist, the clouds and haze I am but a lonely girl drifting in eternal deepness Touching the sky is easy for this seeking dreamer It is the night, deep with velvet, rich darkness He strokes my black hair and winds it in his finger Withdrawing my cloak, my damp, tangled hair falls Touching the sky is easy for this seeking dreamer Then, I have wings as another fantasy dream calls Withdrawing my cloak, my damp, tangled hair falls What will my fantasy dreamt be, while dreaming? So many sweet places kept secret from the living drifting a dream this girl is swirling where will it take me now? _________________________ December 13, 2012 Poetry/Terzanelle/Questionku/Fantasy Dreaming Copyright Protected, ID 12-442-664-13 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France For the Standard contest, Terzanelle Fantasy and QuestionKu Sponsor, Richard Lamoureau Second Place
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Date: 1/12/2013 11:47:00 AM
Constance,Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2013 11:12:00 AM
Constance congrats on your win, enjoyed this write...David
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Date: 1/12/2013 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Constance luv xx
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:47:00 PM
Constance.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser " contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
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Date: 1/11/2013 8:10:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem Constance! Congratulations and thank you! E=mc²
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Date: 1/11/2013 7:43:00 PM
Hopefully to another sweet dream...Congrads on your win Light & Love
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Date: 1/11/2013 6:53:00 PM
Truly one of the best, congratulations.
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Date: 12/20/2012 5:23:00 PM
wow, I LOVE yours, Constance, and the questionku too. One of the BEST. Such luscious imagery!!!
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Date: 12/17/2012 3:55:00 PM
this is amazing Constance, i really do like this, you don't need luck with this wonderful entry.. it is that good...
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Date: 12/17/2012 8:04:00 AM
I loved this imagery and I agree with Gail, I do hope you get a winning spot! Sami.
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Date: 12/13/2012 2:05:00 PM
This is a beautiful and wondrous write my friend! You were right, yours is a little more dark, but honestly it isn't really that dark! I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem this afternoon! What a powerful piece that you have written, Great Work!!
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