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Fantasy Dream

the sky is dark blue this dreamy night but, in the vast canopy only one star is winking it beckons to my soul so I reach out with my finger and magically stars are sprinkling and cascading like a waterfall of lights they swirl and twirl and dance I am taken up in a whirlwind of bliss and delight then, I find myself in an enchanted forest alone, but for a beautiful unicorn horse all white and I ride this ethereal creature all the night long over streams flowing and forests and valleys green to stunning ancient places and wondrous cities then, sadly it is dawn and I must un-dream this dream ______________________________ June 20, 2015 Edit - March 20, 2021 Poetry/Verse/fantasy dream Copyright Protected, ID 03-1337-603-20 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, All Yours (Mar 22) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/21/2021 First Place

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Date: 3/21/2021 7:01:00 AM
So sad to un-dr.eam the fantasy dream. CONGRATS to WIN.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2021 12:34:00 PM
Anisha, thanks for the congrats, I was not even sure if undream was a word, lol _Constance
Date: 3/21/2021 6:07:00 AM
What an enchanting dream!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2021 12:34:00 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the enchanting, love that word _Constance
Date: 3/20/2021 1:42:00 PM
I found mysel wishing this happened to me then.when the unicorn appeared I realized I WAS living it through your poem...for which I thank you much!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2021 12:35:00 PM
Sally, thank you for that wonderful comment _Constance
Date: 3/20/2021 12:41:00 PM
Yes, sadly so, our dream must end. I felt myself floating along with you "over streams flowing and forests and valleys green..." I love adjectives which follow their noun so beautifully. Exquisite work!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/20/2021 12:46:00 PM
Milton, thank you for the nice comment and the compliment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 3/20/2021 10:44:00 AM
Oh, thank you for taking us on this journey through your beautiful dreams, Constance! How I'd love to ride a unicorn through an enchanted forest. Best wishes for a win in Brian's contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Constance La France
Date: 3/20/2021 12:47:00 PM
Carolyn, thanks for visiting my poem, oh would that not be lovely, but we can dreams, hugs _Constance

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