Fancy that

A voluptuous woman named Carol Adored wearing transparent apparel Did I just see a boob? She may as well be nude Humph, she'll be turning all the men feral This gal Carol has a bit of a cheek Doesn't mind giving anyone a peek I am not at all jealous That she gets all the fellas I'm just sharing an honest critique

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2024 3:23:00 PM

This is great limericking! Big congrats

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/26/2024 3:30:00 PM

Thank Andrea, I'm always pleased when I manage a reasonable limerick - thanks for the enthusiasm :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/25/2024 1:51:00 PM

DD, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick set!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/25/2024 2:03:00 PM

Many thanks

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/14/2024 11:34:00 PM

Not only did you make me laugh, I need to laugh, thank you!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/14/2024 11:43:00 PM

You're welcome. Thank you for telling me, there is no greater pleasure than the knowledge that I improved someone's day :)

Paul Willason

Date: 5/12/2024 4:54:00 PM

You have given full reign to your sense of humour my dear DD...just marvellous, made my morning coffee into a good giggle....

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/13/2024 1:21:00 AM

Glad to hear it Paul, I'm not particularly a joke teller - usually opportunistic observational one liners are my thing (never plan, just prepared by being resourceful haha). Glad you liked my dalliance into the limerick for this contest. The ask was 'bawdy' - but I pitched as the judgemental onlooker, the secrets poetry reveals haha

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/12/2024 12:32:00 PM

Your "Fancy that" Limerick write is way tooooooo funny. If for a contest then, "Good Luck." Have a fun day/summer..............

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/12/2024 12:40:00 PM

Thanks Paula - fingers crossed :)

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 5/12/2024 8:45:00 AM

LOL Haven't heard too many funny limericks like this one since Rico L. left the soup. Enjoyed and thank you for the laugh..

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/12/2024 10:07:00 AM

Thank you Nancy! I know Rico will always be held in high regard, so thank you for the comparison. Glad you liked it :)