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FANCY-FREE INNOCENCE fancy-free with poetic slippers, zoetic zephyr on tippy-toes. a ballerina schemes in untouched colors. words pop, revive, undaunted, untainted. streamers of ink with charismatic truths, crown of free spirit, unfeignedly pulsating. a poet whose heart glows in the dark - an enigmatic spark, she’s a blue flame. she’s like the teasing wind that rustles the wheat. the virgin flame dances through black and white. her full skirt flaunts a dynamic rainbow halo - this enchanting paradigm, gypsy of paradise. her hem never touches the ground, hypnagogic hues transcend the soul. Does the poet surrender her fancy-free innocence to authority’s chains that long to claim her prize? the autumn leaves, blow beautiful, o’er ground she floats on zero gravity never landing. 5/22/2017 For Fancy Free Contest

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Date: 5/22/2017 8:39:00 PM
Kim i love everything about this poem 7 +++
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2017 8:41:00 PM
Thanks so much, Constance! <3
Date: 5/22/2017 9:04:00 AM
This poem definitely feels fancy free to me. Really very beautiful Kim. Good luck in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2017 9:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Chris! Always appreciate your encouragement!

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