Family- Pick Or Pick On

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One liners 3

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Family...you can't pick them, but...they can pick on you!

John Derek Hamilton
December 07, 2015

For one liner 3
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3rd Place

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Date: 12/11/2015 9:20:00 PM
Nice play on words, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/9/2015 2:57:00 PM
They sure can John:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/8/2015 11:55:00 PM
Congrats! Well said.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/9/2015 1:17:00 AM
Thanks same to you.
Date: 12/8/2015 6:19:00 PM
very well said!! congrats
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/8/2015 8:11:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, same back to you well done!
Date: 12/8/2015 5:59:00 PM
Very true, indeed! Congratulations on your win, John. Sandra
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/8/2015 8:10:00 PM
Thanks Sandra back at ya!
Date: 12/8/2015 4:58:00 PM
JOHN, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/8/2015 8:09:00 PM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 12/8/2015 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/8/2015 4:32:00 PM
Thanks Nayda, back to you also.
Date: 12/8/2015 2:13:00 PM
lol John...well done and congratulations.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2015 4:41:00 PM
Thanks, John.. he has a new one up... not going to get much warmth on a one liner about sports haha
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/8/2015 4:31:00 PM
congrats to you, I think he was looking for warmth, so you nailed it, clever just misses the mark seems like not what he's looking for. Thanks anyway.
Date: 12/8/2015 1:55:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poems in "One liners three- family" contest, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/8/2015 4:28:00 PM
Congrats goes to you well done, I missed the mark on this one.
Date: 12/7/2015 4:57:00 PM
SO true...this is great. BG
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/7/2015 5:17:00 PM
Thanks Barbara for your visit and kind comment
Date: 12/7/2015 12:41:00 PM
- So true, we must be satisfied with what we get :)) - Good luck in the contest, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/7/2015 2:49:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise
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