Falls Walk

As I walk among drifted leaves
watching as a few more fly
One by chance clings to my sleeve
and I'm reminded of years gone by

Where I am deep with in a fall leaf pile
that Grandpa was raking up
I recall that smell so sweet and mild
as with each rake stroke I was enveloped

I continue further on my way
and spy rabbits nibbling flowers
I hear coyotes sing their unique talk
so luring I could listen for hours

But a twilight sky comes creeping fast
as it always does this time of year
I watch the evenings colors cast
upon backdrops both far and near

I breathe in the fading light
tasting woodsmoke scented dusk
Through the landscape a wispy flight
trailing it's fragrant musk

An aromatic memory comes to mind
of bonfires on the beach sands
Mesmerized by the dying sun on the tide
and the vivid hues as they'd expand

I stand now in my front yard
and watch stars wink on one by one
Each one like a diamond shard
that on a velvet cloak is sewn upon

I take a final deep breath 
of the desert fall scented air
I walk inside my welcoming home
Knowing memories still grow here


Placement:  Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Johnson Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 9:51 PM
One of the loveliest of these fall poems that I have read. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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September 1, 2010 at 1:29 PM
Congrats on your great win!!! always Michael
Brown Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in Amelia Harmon's contest "Fall". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:59 AM
A real multi sensory experience Aces in my book. There were many great writes for this one but yours is my favorite so far! Congrad's & Light & Love
Neels Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 4:39 AM
Paula thanks for taking me on this Walk.. Congratulations on your win as well, love Wilma
Haick Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 10:11 PM
My congratulations on your HM, Paula. ....Love, Audrey
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 9:46 PM
Paula, what a dream of a poem this is....fond memories and autumn go together beautifully in your moving poem. Congratulations on your HM.
Roberts Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:07 PM
lovely, congrats on your HM
Culverhouse Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:01 PM
congrats on the placement in the contest!! great work!
Devonshire Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 5:49 PM
Outstanding poem, Paula! I felt like I was taking that walk with you. Brilliant use of imagery. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 3:37 PM
I dont know how she ever picked mine as first..this is so lovely..and so worthy..the entries to this one were fabulous. Congrats to you. BG
Richards Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 3:01 PM
I love the feeling of nostalgia mixed into the scent of the autumn air of this poem. Nicely done, Paula! Congratulations on your win! ~ Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 2:33 PM
Congrats Paula on your super HM in the Fall contest... enjoy my friend.. this happy moment..with luv.. did u see my cute puppy???
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 8:44 AM
a really strong flow from start to finish it takes the reader back and just brings thoose emotions great write Paula and thank you for the comment on a deeply personal poem
Haick Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 7:54 PM
Hey Paula, this is beautiful and warm! Thanks for sharing your excellent works here on the Soup! I enjoy your poems. Peace, Audrey
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