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Falls Walk

As I walk among drifted leaves watching as a few more fly One by chance clings to my sleeve and I'm reminded of years gone by Where I am deep with in a fall leaf pile that Grandpa was raking up I recall that smell so sweet and mild as with each rake stroke I was enveloped I continue further on my way and spy rabbits nibbling flowers I hear coyotes sing their unique talk so luring I could listen for hours But a twilight sky comes creeping fast as it always does this time of year I watch the evenings colors cast upon backdrops both far and near I breathe in the fading light tasting woodsmoke scented dusk Through the landscape a wispy flight trailing it's fragrant musk An aromatic memory comes to mind of bonfires on the beach sands Mesmerized by the dying sun on the tide and the vivid hues as they'd expand I stand now in my front yard and watch stars wink on one by one Each one like a diamond shard that on a velvet cloak is sewn upon I take a final deep breath of the desert fall scented air I walk inside my welcoming home Knowing memories still grow here Placement: Honorable Mention

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/2/2010 9:51:00 PM
One of the loveliest of these fall poems that I have read. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/1/2010 1:29:00 PM
Congrats on your great win!!! always Michael
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in Amelia Harmon's contest "Fall". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:59:00 AM
A real multi sensory experience Aces in my book. There were many great writes for this one but yours is my favorite so far! Congrad's & Light & Love
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Date: 9/1/2010 4:39:00 AM
Paula thanks for taking me on this Walk.. Congratulations on your win as well, love Wilma
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:11:00 PM
My congratulations on your HM, Paula. ....Love, Audrey
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Date: 8/31/2010 9:46:00 PM
Paula, what a dream of a poem this is....fond memories and autumn go together beautifully in your moving poem. Congratulations on your HM.
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:07:00 PM
lovely, congrats on your HM
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:01:00 PM
congrats on the placement in the contest!! great work!
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Date: 8/31/2010 5:49:00 PM
Outstanding poem, Paula! I felt like I was taking that walk with you. Brilliant use of imagery. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:37:00 PM
I dont know how she ever picked mine as first..this is so lovely..and so worthy..the entries to this one were fabulous. Congrats to you. BG
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:01:00 PM
I love the feeling of nostalgia mixed into the scent of the autumn air of this poem. Nicely done, Paula! Congratulations on your win! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/31/2010 2:33:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your super HM in the Fall contest... enjoy my friend.. this happy moment..with luv.. did u see my cute puppy???
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Date: 2/3/2010 8:44:00 AM
a really strong flow from start to finish it takes the reader back and just brings thoose emotions great write Paula and thank you for the comment on a deeply personal poem
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Date: 2/2/2010 7:54:00 PM
Hey Paula, this is beautiful and warm! Thanks for sharing your excellent works here on the Soup! I enjoy your poems. Peace, Audrey
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