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Falling Wish

the night is so black where did the falling stars go? invisible wishes Heidi Sands 10/19/22

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Date: 10/22/2022 12:41:00 PM

I really enjoyed this write Heidi, hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/22/2022 12:57:00 PM

I am happy you enjoyed this . Thank you Joseph ! Hugs :)

Date: 10/21/2022 10:16:00 PM

May Invisible Wishes come to light. Have Good Days

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/22/2022 5:43:00 AM

Thank you Anisha. I hope you have a nice day :)

Date: 10/21/2022 4:02:00 AM

Nicely done, Heidi; invisible before they could be accounted and answered? Let us hope not.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/21/2022 5:11:00 AM

Ho Joe. Thank you. Let's hope not invisible before answered. The falling stars fade out so quickly. :)

Date: 10/20/2022 3:33:00 PM

Nice

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/20/2022 3:53:00 PM

Thank you Kim :)

Date: 10/20/2022 11:57:00 AM

Interesting! Wishes and prayers meet the same fate . . .Aloha!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/20/2022 1:19:00 PM

Hi Rico. Thank you for your input :)

Date: 10/19/2022 7:25:00 PM

Love the theme Heidi clever and witty enjoyed reading. You are quite the writer...

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/20/2022 6:14:00 AM

I am happy you love it Michael. Thank you for the kind comment :)

Date: 10/19/2022 6:28:00 PM

Great haiku, Heidi. Everyone makes wishes when they look up at the stars; the way you've juxtaposed stars with desires is really wonderful.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/19/2022 6:48:00 PM

Thank you Sotto. I appreciate your comment. :)