Falling Petals

A flower blooms - only for a time -
then petal by falling petal, dies.
And faster still when winter settles -
washing white all color from sight.

An heirloom clock wakes sleepy night, 
a new calendar sits on tidy desk,
a still life hanging on shadowed wall -
helps to remind of spring's rebirth 
as days grow ever shorter.

Does winter's chill call thoughts of death
to those who would rather forget
or bury our discontent beneath the snow?
In late autumn's weary hours, 
I tend to the fading flowers
and waiting, hold my breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yates Avatar
January 12, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Good free verse, with a little internal rhyming to spice it up, "petal - settles".
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 6:21 PM
wow, the more I see of your poetry recently, the more I realize what a great talent we lost while you were away. this is so beautiful.
Enriquez Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 7:01 PM
Dear Rhonda: Lovely write. Lovely read. Nicely done this meditative poem. Congratulations on this POTD. Leon
Mcdaid Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 6:04 PM
rhonda truly very beautifully painted piece congratulations on poem of the day dear friend
Thorisdottir  Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 5:02 PM
perfect, I love this creation, passion from the observer.
Roper Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 1:12 PM
Ronda, wonderful write, Congratulations on poem of the day :)eve
Walker  Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Beautiful Rhonda... Congratulations on being featured as poem of the day. Verlena
Meade Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 8:05 AM
The sleep of death will wake to the breath of spring. I just covered my garden with a deep blanket of leaf mulch . . . loved the poem.
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 7:01 AM
- A very good work - Congrats with "today's poem" Rhonda ! - Have a lovely weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 3:05 PM
Hello Rhonda, A most captivating free verse write here. The imagery is both fabulous and most descriptive. This one's a most solid "7." Enjoyed it very much. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 12:50 PM
Unique imagery, though-packed, wonderful sequences, petals make a cycle of birth-death-rebirth and waiting as catalytic. Grand, perfect 7. adding to my fav...love Rhonda XXXX RAJAT
Sirak Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Uniquely creative with such vibrant images. Your line "in autumn's weary hours" calls to mind so many things.
Yvonne Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 7:07 AM
I read a lot more in this poem then meets the eye. It is richly layered with unique imagery. An excellent poem.
Onclaud Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 6:27 AM
ohh, you capture the spirit of seasons that finds life a celebration, Rhonda.. well done!.. hugggs
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