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Falling Leaf

A leaf falls from a branch and slowly gently floats and flits and then turns like a dancer with both feet above ground just to land again quickly back and lay still. March 17, 2023 5th Place Waltz Wave Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Akanksha Ayantika

Date: 4/2/2023 10:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Very neatly written. Regards~ Akanksha

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/2/2023 6:14:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delighting and delightful from the start 'til the end. God bless you.

David Mohn

Date: 4/1/2023 4:54:00 PM

wonderful image you created Ryan...congratulations

Di11y Da11y

Date: 4/1/2023 11:42:00 AM

Sweet imagery, congratulations on your win

Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/1/2023 4:08:00 PM

Thank you for the appreciation! Blessings to all!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/1/2023 10:53:00 AM

The gentle movement in your poem describes aptly a leaf's last dance, Ryan. Congratulations on your win. Regards // paul

Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/1/2023 4:08:00 PM

Thank you, Paul, for the appreciation! Blessings to you!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/1/2023 10:52:00 AM

Soft, romantic dance of the leaf Ryan, and well-constructed! Congratulations on your win! :)

Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/1/2023 4:09:00 PM

Thank you very much for appreciating my poem. With best regards!

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/1/2023 10:11:00 AM

Congratulations Ryan! Your imaginative poem "Falling Leaf", has earned you a distinguished place in my “wave" poetry contest. I was strict; and yet, your poem definitely earned its place on the winners list my friend, Emile.

Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/1/2023 4:10:00 PM

Thank you very much dear friend, Emile, for appreciating my poem. Regards!