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A beauty! I saw her strolling in main street, A face that launched a thousand ships. And a mere working boy with no glamour, How could I aspire to kiss those lovely lips? Oh well, you can have the cake but not eat it. Soon she entered a boutique and changed Into a gorgeous sexy outfit that made me gloat. I could not go to meet her. I felt estranged. I hurried on afraid I could be a stalker. I noticed the women around, all nondescript. Dared I return and catch another glimpse? I wondered what dress she might have equipped. And then I saw her dressed in tattered jeans. She was just like other women, no longer a queen. I sidled up to her and boldly asked My friend, where are those fabulous dresses green? She laughed like a nightingale and smiled sweetly. It's just a trade to entice others to buy such ware. I offered her a coffee and something to eat. Tell me your name, mine is just plain Claire. My tale must end there, your choice how it ends. But marriage was evident not just ordinary friends.

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Date: 7/3/2023 9:52:00 PM
A wonderful story. I feel she is a smart woman who knows her trade. Your imagination works in unprecedented ways, dear Victor. You are springing up everyday with such enticing romantic stories. Your body may be weak, but your mind and spirit so buoyant....! Keep it up
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Date: 7/3/2023 9:45:00 PM
So, to entice the buyers to buy, sounds like good idea. Great verse, my friend
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Date: 7/3/2023 7:50:00 PM
Ah, I see you are more than fully recovered now, Victor and bubbling with that romantic effervescence of innocence that pulsates in every pore of your being! A fabulous write as always, that has us in the edge of our seats, empathising with the ‘mere working boy’ who finally secures the object of his heart’s desire. Bravo!
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Date: 7/3/2023 4:19:00 PM
cool story . Is it for the narrative contest going on?
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Date: 7/3/2023 8:17:00 PM
It does not rhyme.
Date: 7/3/2023 1:52:00 PM
Victor Victor Victor. I know you haven't felt well and are battling your health as well but please allow me to say you have not lost your voice. Oh my goodness your voice is still with you. (smile for you smile for us readers). This is beautiful poetry with all elements attached, And yes, who could not adore your theme, certainly not me (yet another smile). Thank you for always sharing your talent. Love Peace and Blessings now and always...(smile smile smile)
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Date: 7/3/2023 10:58:00 AM
Victor, I love your tale of a chance encounter, that led to romance and marriage. Beautifully told! :)
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Date: 7/3/2023 10:50:00 AM
A lovely tale, Victor! It is funny how clothes do make a difference, yet how true love longs to see the true self as well - love the whole being! God bless!
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Date: 7/3/2023 5:18:00 AM
Your story a joy to read, Victor. A tale of romance from your romantic, pen.
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Date: 7/3/2023 3:39:00 AM
... I can read the whole story through your wonderful poems, Victor ... I think I know several of the chapters ... I always enjoy your poems :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
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Date: 7/3/2023 3:06:00 AM
We never know where our roads may lead until we opt to walk down them. I enjoyed your tale, Victor.
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Date: 7/3/2023 1:44:00 AM
Great story, Victor, do enter my latest contest:)
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