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Falling In Love

Sweet-nothings of lover cooing like dove A poem lovely as falling in love A mating fervor of a smitten glance An indulgence of impending romance Invigorating sight of dazzled eyes Unspoken dialogue passions surmise Emboldening zeal of ecstatic dream Strumming lyrical, mellifluous theme Elixir of life cheering beguiled hearts In blazing vibes enamored love imparts Bowing to love as emotions cajole Falling in love writes a poem of soul March 2, 2022 Placed 1st: A Brian Strand Formal Contest Placed 2nd: A Poem Lovely As…Poetry Contest Sponsor: Margarita Lillico Inspired by Joyce Kilmer’s “Trees” Ten syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com)

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The Situation

Date: 7/11/2023 5:41:00 PM

Looking for something I found this. Luckily I did this makes the soup worth it.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/13/2022 9:29:00 AM

I adore this romantic poem that so beautifully conveys the thrill of falling in love Vijay. Congratulations on your second place win which is first place for me. I am putting this into my Faves! I entered “ Aesthetic Autumn” which was an older poem but it didn’t make the winning list. Your poetry always brings me much joy and inspiration my friend. I agree with B.J. I hope you write a book of poetry. Have a wonderful week. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/22/2022 2:16:00 PM

Much appreciate you taking the time to write detailed comments, Connie. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Anil Deo

Date: 3/13/2022 7:33:00 AM

Bhaiji, stay with "simple living and high thinking," as I believe your prayers & words contribute your bit for world peace (re. Coexistence). Shalom, shalOm ??

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/22/2022 2:15:00 PM

Much appreciate Anil--many thanks.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/13/2022 5:39:00 AM

"Elixir of life" - Very true. Beautiful work. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/22/2022 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj--much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2022 11:16:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work in this one. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this contest winner. I like the poem upon which you based your entry. Your visits to my page were marvelous. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2022 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Sara--much appreciate.

Michael Tor

Date: 3/8/2022 3:51:00 PM

Wonderful piece Vijay, such a loving heart you have. Be blessed my friend...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2022 6:02:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/8/2022 3:47:00 PM

Love every couplet, beautiful poetry Vijay. Congratulations on your win in Margarita’s contest… Belle

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2022 6:02:00 AM

Much appreciate Belle--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2022 1:14:00 PM

I see this got congrats, so I take it this is a winner. WEll deserved. It's so romantic.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2022 6:02:00 AM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/7/2022 11:06:00 AM

"A poem of the soul," "elixir of life" - just two of your sparkling images of love Vijay. Agreed, love is the "elixir of life" and of the soul propelling us into life's stream. I love your blend of words and images to create your uniquely wonderful poems! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2022 5:22:00 PM

So very kind of you Sam. Thanks for your visit and comments. Much appreciate.

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/7/2022 10:22:00 AM

Your way with romance is always so beautiful to read Vijay! Congrats on your win!!! Happy Monday!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2022 5:21:00 PM

Much appreciate Mike--many thanks.

Elaine George

Date: 3/7/2022 9:22:00 AM

Many congratulations on your great win with this very lovely romantic poem, dear Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2022 5:21:00 PM

Thank you Elaine--much appreciate.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/7/2022 2:23:00 AM

Vijay, you have such a kind and loving passionate heart! You crafted this poem with great style and elegance.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2022 7:58:00 AM

Glad to hear that from you my friend. Much appreciate as always, Lasaad.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/6/2022 10:30:00 PM

So stupendous! Love this write and have made it a fave Vijay. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2022 7:58:00 AM

Many thanks Jennifer--much appreciate.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/5/2022 1:49:00 PM

Ohhh wow, exquisite Vijay. This is incredibly beautiful. I am getting old, and your poem brought back memories of my husband and I when we were falling in love <3 Gosh, I love your poem! <3 ~BJ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2022 7:57:00 AM

Always a joy to read your feedback, BJ. So glad you liked the poem. Special treat to receive your FAVE. Many thanks.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2022 7:57:00 AM

Thanks again, BJ.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/5/2022 1:50:00 PM

Actually, another FAV <3 :) You need to publish a book! <3

Anil Deo

Date: 3/5/2022 8:57:00 AM

Another classic by Vijay. I cone late ... Yet Congrats again, as I enjoy how Pietry is pwrsiminufied as Cupid #2. Shalom shalOm blessings

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2022 12:01:00 PM

Thank you Anil. Glad you stopped by. Much appreciate.

Valsa George

Date: 3/5/2022 8:19:00 AM

Hi Vijay, Congratulations on your deserved win !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2022 12:01:00 PM

Thank you for your return visit Valsa--much appreciate.

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/4/2022 12:08:00 PM

Very nice, Vjay. Oh, to be young again~I know, a lot is attitude...but not quite the same. Good luck in the contest. This could be a winner.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2022 12:00:00 PM

Thank you Joe--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Deb M

Date: 3/4/2022 8:54:00 AM

What a sweet loving romantic heart you have Vijay! Beautifully written. Debx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2022 12:00:00 PM

Thank you Deb. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/4/2022 8:07:00 AM

Who would not get enamored after reading this ! Nice one Vijay, winning wishes on wings of doves, !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2022 11:59:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate.

Bill Baker

Date: 3/4/2022 8:03:00 AM

Lots of love in this poem, Vijay. A quality entry for the contest. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Bill

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2022 11:59:00 AM

Glad you stopped by Bill with your kind remarks. Much appreciate Many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 3/4/2022 6:33:00 AM

Very creative take on the theme Vijay, Wonderful write...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2022 11:58:00 AM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/4/2022 4:58:00 AM

A heavenly poem on love, inspired by angels above! Excellent, my dearest friend, Vijay. May every heart be inspired to love! Blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2022 6:08:00 AM

So nice to hear that--especially from you, my dear friend. Much appreciate your feedback. Many thanks for stopping by Demetrios.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/3/2022 3:31:00 PM

Oh beautifully crafted; good luck in the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2022 6:06:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, MLK. Many thanks.

Valsa George

Date: 3/3/2022 8:32:00 AM

You are a bard of romance and love... ! Who can excel you in your art ! I liked the way you have approached the subject ! Best of luck in the contest dear friend....

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2022 6:06:00 AM

So very kind of you my dear friend. Much appreciate and value your feedback, as always. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/3/2022 7:08:00 AM

This is so nice and sweet. I love the 1st and last lines. Very much enjoyed :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/3/2022 9:24:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. Appreciate your visit and comments, as always.