Vijay Pandit Poet Couplet

Falling In Love

Sweet-nothings of lover cooing like dove
A poem lovely as falling in love

A mating fervor of a smitten glance
An indulgence of impending romance

Invigorating sight of dazzled eyes
Unspoken dialogue passions surmise

Emboldening zeal of ecstatic dream
Strumming lyrical, mellifluous theme

Elixir of life cheering beguiled hearts
In blazing vibes enamored love imparts

Bowing to love as emotions cajole
Falling in love writes a poem of soul

March 2, 2022
Placed 1st: A Brian Strand Formal Contest
Placed 2nd: A Poem Lovely As…Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Margarita Lillico
Inspired by Joyce Kilmer’s “Trees”
Ten syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com)

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The Situation July 11, 2023 at 5:41 PM Looking for something I found this. Luckily I did this makes the soup worth it.

Connie Marcum Wong March 13, 2022 at 9:29 AM I adore this romantic poem that so beautifully conveys the thrill of falling in love Vijay. Congratulations on your second place win which is first place for me. I am putting this into my Faves! I entered “ Aesthetic Autumn” which was an older poem but it didn’t make the winning list. Your poetry always brings me much joy and inspiration my friend. I agree with B.J. I hope you write a book of poetry. Have a wonderful week. Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit March 22, 2022 at 2:16 PM Much appreciate you taking the time to write detailed comments, Connie. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Anil Deo March 13, 2022 at 7:33 AM Bhaiji, stay with "simple living and high thinking," as I believe your prayers & words contribute your bit for world peace (re. Coexistence). Shalom, shalOm ?? Vijay Pandit March 22, 2022 at 2:15 PM Much appreciate Anil--many thanks.

Christuraj Alex March 13, 2022 at 5:39 AM "Elixir of life" - Very true. Beautiful work. Congratulations! Vijay Pandit March 22, 2022 at 2:15 PM Thank you Christuraj--much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick March 9, 2022 at 11:16 AM Congrats on your winning work in this one. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this contest winner. I like the poem upon which you based your entry. Your visits to my page were marvelous. Sara Vijay Pandit March 9, 2022 at 11:51 AM Thank you Sara--much appreciate.

Michael Tor March 8, 2022 at 3:51 PM Wonderful piece Vijay, such a loving heart you have. Be blessed my friend... Vijay Pandit March 9, 2022 at 6:02 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Beryl Edmonds March 8, 2022 at 3:47 PM Love every couplet, beautiful poetry Vijay. Congratulations on your win in Margarita’s contest… Belle Vijay Pandit March 9, 2022 at 6:02 AM Much appreciate Belle--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich March 8, 2022 at 1:14 PM I see this got congrats, so I take it this is a winner. WEll deserved. It's so romantic. Vijay Pandit March 9, 2022 at 6:02 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Sam Kauffman March 7, 2022 at 11:06 AM "A poem of the soul," "elixir of life" - just two of your sparkling images of love Vijay. Agreed, love is the "elixir of life" and of the soul propelling us into life's stream. I love your blend of words and images to create your uniquely wonderful poems! Congratulations on your win! Blessings! Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 5:22 PM So very kind of you Sam. Thanks for your visit and comments. Much appreciate.

Mike Gentile March 7, 2022 at 10:22 AM Your way with romance is always so beautiful to read Vijay! Congrats on your win!!! Happy Monday!! Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 5:21 PM Much appreciate Mike--many thanks.

Elaine George March 7, 2022 at 9:22 AM Many congratulations on your great win with this very lovely romantic poem, dear Vijay. Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 5:21 PM Thank you Elaine--much appreciate.

Sotto Poet March 7, 2022 at 2:23 AM Vijay, you have such a kind and loving passionate heart! You crafted this poem with great style and elegance. Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 7:58 AM Glad to hear that from you my friend. Much appreciate as always, Lasaad.

Jennifer Proxenos March 6, 2022 at 10:30 PM So stupendous! Love this write and have made it a fave Vijay. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 7:58 AM Many thanks Jennifer--much appreciate.

Bj Legros Kelley March 5, 2022 at 1:49 PM Ohhh wow, exquisite Vijay. This is incredibly beautiful. I am getting old, and your poem brought back memories of my husband and I when we were falling in love <3 Gosh, I love your poem! <3 ~BJ Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 7:57 AM Always a joy to read your feedback, BJ. So glad you liked the poem. Special treat to receive your FAVE. Many thanks. Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 7:57 AM Thanks again, BJ. Bj Legros Kelley March 5, 2022 at 1:50 PM Actually, another FAV <3 :) You need to publish a book! <3

Anil Deo March 5, 2022 at 8:57 AM Another classic by Vijay. I cone late ... Yet Congrats again, as I enjoy how Pietry is pwrsiminufied as Cupid #2. Shalom shalOm blessings Vijay Pandit March 5, 2022 at 12:01 PM Thank you Anil. Glad you stopped by. Much appreciate.

Valsa George March 5, 2022 at 8:19 AM Hi Vijay, Congratulations on your deserved win ! Vijay Pandit March 5, 2022 at 12:01 PM Thank you for your return visit Valsa--much appreciate.

Joseph P. DiMino March 4, 2022 at 12:08 PM Very nice, Vjay. Oh, to be young again~I know, a lot is attitude...but not quite the same. Good luck in the contest. This could be a winner. Vijay Pandit March 5, 2022 at 12:00 PM Thank you Joe--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Deb M March 4, 2022 at 8:54 AM What a sweet loving romantic heart you have Vijay! Beautifully written. Debx Vijay Pandit March 5, 2022 at 12:00 PM Thank you Deb. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Mystic Rose Rose March 4, 2022 at 8:07 AM Who would not get enamored after reading this ! Nice one Vijay, winning wishes on wings of doves, ! Vijay Pandit March 5, 2022 at 11:59 AM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate.

Bill Baker March 4, 2022 at 8:03 AM Lots of love in this poem, Vijay. A quality entry for the contest. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Bill Vijay Pandit March 5, 2022 at 11:59 AM Glad you stopped by Bill with your kind remarks. Much appreciate Many thanks.

Joseph May March 4, 2022 at 6:33 AM Very creative take on the theme Vijay, Wonderful write... Vijay Pandit March 5, 2022 at 11:58 AM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis March 4, 2022 at 4:58 AM A heavenly poem on love, inspired by angels above! Excellent, my dearest friend, Vijay. May every heart be inspired to love! Blessings. Vijay Pandit March 4, 2022 at 6:08 AM So nice to hear that--especially from you, my dear friend. Much appreciate your feedback. Many thanks for stopping by Demetrios.

M. L. Kiser March 3, 2022 at 3:31 PM Oh beautifully crafted; good luck in the contest. Vijay Pandit March 4, 2022 at 6:06 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, MLK. Many thanks.

Valsa George March 3, 2022 at 8:32 AM You are a bard of romance and love... ! Who can excel you in your art ! I liked the way you have approached the subject ! Best of luck in the contest dear friend.... Vijay Pandit March 4, 2022 at 6:06 AM So very kind of you my dear friend. Much appreciate and value your feedback, as always. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands March 3, 2022 at 7:08 AM This is so nice and sweet. I love the 1st and last lines. Very much enjoyed :) Vijay Pandit March 3, 2022 at 9:24 AM Thank you Heidi. Appreciate your visit and comments, as always.

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