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Falling In Love - Back To Square One

Falling in love, "I love you". Three magical words open a new world. In childhood, an intrigue. In adolescence, a fantasy. In adulthood, a freedom of expression. In middle age, a hope to live. In old age, the reminiscence of youth. First mum and Dad. Then Brothers and sisters. Then cousins, then friends, then others and others ... And how many of them! Oh when will it be my time... And finally came my divine day I lost count of everything... I relish every seconds. Repeated those fantastic words in different tune to different music. But lo! the music stopped one gloomy day. And then, so many times was I to fall in and out of love. As if there was nothing more important to do in this whole world! And great, this is where I never learnt a new lesson. Every new time my counter is set to zero. And here, I'm back to square one... I've fallen in love again!

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Date: 5/21/2017 12:54:00 AM
Such a nice poem you ve written it beautifully and I really loke reading it however i m new on this site and ve recently posted a poem relating to this topic and I would really appreciate if you could find time to read it and give your honest reviews about it
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Date: 6/30/2016 9:53:00 PM
this is marvelous, Sunita. you are an inspiring poet.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/1/2016 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...I'm glad you see it like this :)
Date: 6/15/2016 12:32:00 AM
falling in love is like being on a fairground ride with its ups and downs....... Nice poem Seren
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/15/2016 9:48:00 AM
True but even the downs do not hinder us from venturing again...:D. Thanks Seren.
Date: 6/12/2016 12:08:00 PM
This is so beautifully written and so lovely in a subject that every heart cherishes....hugs :)
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/13/2016 8:45:00 AM
Thanks for those wonderful words and the encouragement. I agree with you. Sunita.
Date: 5/22/2016 5:58:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Sunita ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 5/23/2016 8:40:00 AM
Thanks you like it Anne-Lise. These are great words for me. All the best.:)
Date: 5/19/2016 1:23:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 5/19/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thanks you enjoyed it. I'm very new to writing poem and i was very afraid to post them.

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