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Falling

Tell me you didn't sell those stars My files are messed up in the back of my car You don't have to kill the night Let's say there will be no fight The soup is still hot But you demand the cold beer Look outside the door The waters of the lake flowing clear. I'm not sure about the song Tell me why did you do this much wrong? Let the phone ring Who felt the sting? A kingdom without the king.. I know I grieve. Sit beside me don't leave Feel the delicacy of the pain Your guitar makes it rain Records of Brian stuffed in my closet Your clothes on my bed Damn the reality happened too soon You lied that God cared..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/29/2016 11:27:00 AM
Aahna, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/27/2016 9:05:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Aahna. :)
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:47:00 PM
Hi Aahna, Nice & amazing first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........with love.
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Date: 4/27/2016 11:52:00 AM
Deep provoking write, Aahna, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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