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Fallen Leaves Have No Winter Lair

I watch as roaring winds accost withered leaves that would soon be lost. Branches, once laden green, beware ~ November will strip your limbs bare. Your clothes swept to the muck and mire, raked onto their funeral pyre. Wet from drizzling rain, they are tossed, weeping, as if they had been glossed. A windswept death does not seem fair. It fills me with grief and despair. I would raise them up high...higher, each leaf escaping flames of fire. No headstone with name 'Leaf' embossed, etched with November's snow and frost. Fallen leaves have no Winter lair, no warm warren as does the hare. If Nature could somehow transpire to save them, 'twould be my desire. November 29, 2020 William Kekaula's Lay November Contest checked with HMS

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Date: 12/15/2020 7:01:00 PM
Once in a while I will come across a poem that gives me shivers! Congrats! Here's one!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 4:43:00 AM
Oh, what a great compliment you've given this one. Thank you very much, Gayle.
Date: 12/10/2020 11:37:00 AM
This is a stunning poem!! The imagery is very rich, so well written:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 4:42:00 AM
Thank you very much, Carol.
Date: 12/4/2020 8:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/10/2020 7:04:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve.
Date: 12/3/2020 6:04:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. Good flow and rhyme..Sara
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/4/2020 7:24:00 AM
Thank you, Sara
Date: 12/3/2020 4:33:00 AM
As with all things, I think beauty becomes more powerful with age. Great write
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/4/2020 7:24:00 AM
I'm so appreciative of your comments, Mark. Thanks!
Date: 12/2/2020 5:51:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Jenna, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/4/2020 7:24:00 AM
Thanks so much for the honor, William.
Date: 11/30/2020 7:43:00 PM
You will be the 'Lady Who Rescues the Leaves!' Wonderful idea. The leaves truly do need a champion. Happiness and Light, Gershon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/2/2020 12:48:00 AM
If only I could. Their arrival in Spring is always a sign of hope. Thanks so much, Gershon.
Date: 11/29/2020 9:00:00 AM
Such a shame when they fall leaving the trees with skeletal branches. But we look forward to spring when the trees are reborn. Good luck in the contest Jenna. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/29/2020 12:45:00 PM
It truly is a sad ending to their beauty. Thank you, Tom.

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