Fallen Leaf

Maple leaf on stream Diamonds sparkle on each point Beautiful 'til end

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/11/2010 3:26:00 PM

I loved going back and reading some older work of yours...Stunning Haiku my dear..

Marcus Crane

Date: 2/3/2010 6:03:00 PM

sara .. i really enjoyed this beautiful haiku great imagery :) . Marco

Abraham L

Date: 2/3/2010 6:42:00 AM

very artistically visioned, good write

Dean Masciarelli

Date: 2/2/2010 3:56:00 PM

Hi Sara to be able to see a maple leaf floating down the stream with the sun shining on them is beautiful especially when the water sparkles like diamonds and the leaf looks like is is sailing in the wind . Thank you for letting me see through your eyes instead of my own today.Have a wonderful evening Dean

Danny Nunn

Date: 2/1/2010 7:12:00 PM

I can see by your words the picture that you paint here, good write..thanks on Lemons...thru Jesus each of us can turn them into lemonade..Danny

Brian Strand

Date: 1/27/2010 8:20:00 AM

Lovely lyric Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2010 3:53:00 PM

Captured in beauty your fallen leaf... wonderful words of imagery and visual vividness... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 1/26/2010 3:10:00 PM

This is a beautiful Haiku. So much said in few words. Shows your eloquence. Thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem Engraved Image. - Mohammad