Fallen Angels

Angels, descending from above,
Echoes of mercy, whispers of love
Angels, weavers of dreams,
Harbingers of nightmares, they bring screams
When fallen they become, lost is this world
For the heavens become hells, fiery and all curled!

Angels, fallen they may be,
Yet, they shall not remain so for eternity
The ONE above is full of pity
For his children lost in absurdity,
Feeling like crazy beings in a reality
Where Time is Fool's stupidity!

Angels, descending from above, shall try with all their might
To bring harmony to the land of the dove, where lost is the light!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Tracie's~ "Fallen Angel" contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 10:57 AM
Thank you for ur warm thoughts Carol :)
Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 4:17 AM
Congratulations on your win Anoucheka!!! - oxox Anne-Lise
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 10:57 AM
/thank you so much Anne Lise!
Pettit Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:47 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is written very well.
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:50 PM
Thank you loads Robert......I love writing......so appreciation is for me...just Awesome!!!
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:58 PM
Congratulations on your win in the fallen angel contest. A unique poem with its own point of view!
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:42 PM
Thakns for appreciating Andrea!
Bunton Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 3:12 PM
congratulations!
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:43 PM
Thank you Christopher!
Poet Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:55 AM
Anoucheka, Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem.Enjoyed the read.
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:43 PM
Thank you Kash!
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:23 AM
Anoucheka, Wonderful job and a very nice work. Congrats for placing on Tracie's winners list....................S.Ronthorpe
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:43 PM
Thank you Samual
Minardi Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 7:35 AM
Wow, this is massively powerful poem. I enjoyed this! I love how you opened, how you told the stories and how you ended this..perfection on words. Congrats on the win :)
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:44 PM
Thanks so much for appreciation Dinda...Thanks loads! :)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 7:22 AM
congrats on a wonderful win for this magnificent write on fallen Angels luv..
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:44 PM
Thank you so much Linda !
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:09 AM
Congratulations a smashing write a deserving win xx
McBride  Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 9:34 PM
very nice , I enjoyed reading your work
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:42 PM
Thakns loads Stephan!
Amadore Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 8:07 AM
An interesting and creditrable attempt.
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 8:34 AM
Thanks..........!!!
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