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Seraphim of darkness, banished from Heaven. Her black feathers shimmer in the tempest leaven. Radiant against the midnight sky, causes the world to wonder as reflections cast from lightning and the thunder. She weeps alone, as she walks in youthful beauty in the empty land of Purgatory, her life duty. Her nightmares and torture she suffered that were her own. Her sins were hers, for her alone. Her soul sent to care for humankind for all eternity, her only sin, to love deeply with its wonderful serenity. A scarlet rose she holds as a petal falls amid her tears, letting her mind drifts back to another time allowing her lover to appear. His scent would lull her, as he used to cup her face, while she wrapped her wings around her lover in a faint embrace. Lost in the darkness of each other’s gaze, only to be driven for a while, as the world melted away leaving just the two of them in heaven. She weeps alone, holding a scarlet rose, reminded that she was drawn to love a human man not too long ago. Now her lover is gone. 8/7/2017
- Poetry Contest: Fallen Angel Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 8/28/2017 8:46:00 AM
Greetings, Eve. Congrats for your placement with this wonderful piece! ;-)
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Date: 8/25/2017 3:08:00 PM
I love this take on the photo, Eve, just wonderful work - congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 8/25/2017 12:55:00 PM
WONDERFUL. Congrats Eve to win top. you have composed an excellent poem. Hugs
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Date: 8/25/2017 11:17:00 AM
Lovely work Eve, congratulations...
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Date: 8/25/2017 7:22:00 AM
Congratulation on your well deserved win. Nice depiction.
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Date: 8/25/2017 6:51:00 AM
Congrats!!! Eve...1'st place winner...yahooo!!!
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Date: 8/25/2017 6:32:00 AM
I've always loved the word seraphim, and you really had a wonderful take on the photo prompt, beautiful and soothing and love the rhythm. thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 8/19/2017 10:07:00 AM
Bewitching poem of exquisite imagery, Eve. Excellent in it's poetic presentation. Biblically speaking: this is why the fallen angels left their first estate, to marry humans. Fine poetry, dear. Love and joy.
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Date: 8/18/2017 11:14:00 AM
I love this one, Eve. Powerful imagery and such a sad poem... Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.
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Date: 8/9/2017 5:22:00 PM
Beautifully done my friend...I smell a winner lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/9/2017 12:52:00 PM
- Beautifully written, Eve - The truth "wrapped in beautiful silk paper" - A beautiful picture that I have used on one of my poems, a time back - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2017 10:59:00 PM
Wow, that was amazing, a winner for sure. Held me there from start to finish. Regards Craig
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Date: 8/7/2017 8:45:00 PM
My dear Eve, this is for sure a winner....
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Date: 8/7/2017 5:07:00 PM
Thundering writing with lightning images dearest Eve, that leaves an inedible impression into the soul! Good luck my friend!
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Date: 8/7/2017 9:45:00 AM
Great entry, Eve:)
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:11:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem for the contest, Eve! Very well done :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:15:00 AM
Good day Eve...I enjoyed reading your poem...and good luck
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Date: 8/7/2017 4:30:00 AM
Beautifully crafted write my friend! What a spectacular embrace of a poem, such powerful words within this one! You have written a magnificent piece, with such amazing heartache that I felt the angel's pain! Great Work!!
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