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She was a divine lady of a mortal man, their love was to be eternal and forever; a grand ceremony plan, a complicated endeavor . . . Her existence like a garden blooming ever, that day she dressed in a beautiful wedding gown; that day her love died- she fell in the ocean to drown. Anne is a fallen angel- her gown turned black, she haunts the castle and ocean holding a rose; and lightning will crack, the rose to her heart froze . . . An ocean of tears flow as she lay in repose, at night she rises full of sadness and wild rage; though the castle is crumbling- she will not disengage. This beautiful weeping angel will ever rise, her dark tears of sorrow will forever fall; for eternity she cries, broken black wings her shawl . . . She is but a shadow on time's wall, to those who see her, they feel her rage and sorrow; and weep for this dark fallen angel- who has no morrow. __________________________ August 5, 2017 Rhyme/Fallen Angel-Broken Heart Copyright Protected, ID 927142 Written for the contest, Fallen Angel sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 8/28/2017 8:43:00 AM
Congrats BW, for your placement with this deep, emotional piece.
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Date: 8/27/2017 5:35:00 AM
Vivid imagery and a powerful write. Congratulations on your First Place win! Regards, John.
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Date: 8/25/2017 3:06:00 PM
Gorgeous write, BW, and wonderful rhyme scheme - love it - congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 8/25/2017 12:13:00 PM
Broken Wings, beautiful write; congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 8/25/2017 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on another fine win...
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Date: 8/25/2017 8:31:00 AM
This is SO BEAUTIFUL. CONGRATS, Constance. Janice
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Date: 8/25/2017 6:48:00 AM
Congrats!!! Constance...1'st place...yahooo!!!
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Date: 8/25/2017 6:30:00 AM
wow, you really know how to go deep and beautifully dark lovely Broken Wings! thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 9:02:00 AM
Beautiful poem apt for the contest, Constance:) hope you are better:)
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Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2017 2:53:00 PM
Jo thanks for visiting my poem and I am feeling stronger each day!
Date: 8/6/2017 4:11:00 AM
What a glorious write my friend! I surely loved the intricacies of your words through your awesome rhyming scheme! I loved it! Great Work!!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2017 2:50:00 PM
Russell thanks for visiting my poem and for the wonderful comment!
Date: 8/6/2017 1:29:00 AM
Reminds me of an ancestor of mine, said to haunt Glamis Castle. Great poem; hope you have great luck with the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2017 2:50:00 PM
M.L. Thanks for the compliment ~
Date: 8/5/2017 11:17:00 AM
A well written poem for the contest. It reaches the reader deeply :)
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Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2017 2:47:00 PM
Heidi thanks so much!
Date: 8/5/2017 10:36:00 AM
Well written.. With the anguish and sadness freely felt in the lines. I enjoyed
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Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2017 2:46:00 PM
Lewis thanks for visiting my poem!
Date: 8/5/2017 10:19:00 AM
Great Write , Oh but to have experienced such a Love that it's passing will forever cause pain..
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Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2017 2:45:00 PM
Glen thanks so much for visiting my poem !

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