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Fallacy of Personal Space

Personal Space Cannot Exist
There are chances or collisions One never plans, never truly possesses Alone, but with quarks and protons … What matters then our private spaces?
Private alone the mind of the Space Magician Whence comes the contours of our destinies Whereby Little Space and Mighty Space breathe as one Yet One is without clay ears and clay eyes
Touch, trespass, touchiness, trial; Vanity, variety, vortex of violence Mimicking proton and anti-proton in some vain vial Our cell-sites and web-sites exaggerating difference
The message of space is as personal as that of Time Educated, satiated, rich or otherwise – your atom is but mine

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Date: 4/26/2017 5:02:00 PM
Dear Anil. Good Evening. Have a seat. I read your words twice. Sorry for that. I was captivated with this entry in a true to life way. Just allow me to say you have outdone yourself with expression. Read back your words and you will see. Be very proud of this. Honestly. Have a wonderful night. Hope your week is going well.
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Date: 4/25/2017 3:45:00 AM
- An interesting and thoughtful poems, Anil - great poetic written - So true: "Personal Space Can not Exist" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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