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Beauty is in the Eye of the Beholder / Crystol Woods

My beautimous man is my favorite visual treat. Times staring at him are times I often repeat. His blond tendrils hang down, outside his do-rag, and are curls my fingers just have to twirl and grab. Fierce, piercing blue eyes allow his gaze to melt me, happens all the time and never do I ever mind. The rich pay surgeons for cheekbones my man has. My knuckles sometimes trace each bones span. He has such a good-looking nose, not big or small, it’s a nose I frequently kiss on my tip toes. Perfect lips motivate my own to seek his kiss. They aren't thick or thin, but ideal sized bliss. I’m mesmerized by his labor rustled arm muscles that grow a need for my cheeks to muscle nuzzle. My beautimous man said my vision needs to be checked because no features of his do my eyes accurately detect. He said his curls do hang down, but no hair is on his crown. He took me to a mirror to see lines under his eyes clearer, said his cheekbones are no longer sensual but skeletal, his nose now nostril hair grows and rudely hair shows, plus, his muscles have aged and are now sad sag designed. I asked what word bits would he now hurl about his lips - he pulled me close and said, ‘only kisses are on my lip script.’

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Date: 8/10/2025 2:22:00 AM
I find great delight in the truthfulness, authenticity, and wit woven through your poem, CayCay. There lies the essence of genuine love, indeed! What a splendid piece of writing!
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Date: 8/10/2025 2:12:00 AM
Haha….l absolutely love the honesty , realness and humour in your poem CayCay. That is true love right there!! Brilliant write! Debx
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Date: 8/10/2025 2:05:00 AM
Charming. Others may not appreciate. You do. That is the most important thing in life. Poetry hugs.
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Date: 8/10/2025 1:07:00 AM
Awwwwww... this is such a lovely tribute! LOVED the ending... romantic and sweet, like it should be. My husband also laughs at my compliments. Still, he's handsome to me. Thank you for your lovely visit to my page. I appreciate it. Your comment was also uplifting. Blessings to you.
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Date: 8/9/2025 11:43:00 PM
A very beautiful dedication poem for your hubby my dear poet friend, Caycay! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks a lot for sharing. Belated thanks also for reading and commenting my poem. God bless you always. Happy weekend/new week ahead! Hugs
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Date: 8/9/2025 9:14:00 PM
This is a charming tribute, that I enjoyed reading, CayCay. Lovely writing! :)
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Date: 8/9/2025 5:46:00 PM
your husband sounds extraordinary...I have an image of him now. Nicely done! enjoy your weekend, hugs, Sara
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Date: 8/9/2025 11:16:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Great Ending. "‘only kisses are in my lip script.’" Priceless Words... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away........
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Date: 8/9/2025 9:47:00 AM
- What a beautiful description of your dear husband, CayCay :) - hugs
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Date: 8/9/2025 7:40:00 AM
ooh CayCay your man sure is a keeper - what a beautiful tribute to him - I hope you share this gem with Tim! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/9/2025 8:21:00 AM
I did, I read it to him before I posted it to be sure he liked both the upside and the downside, one he loved the other he accepted as the truth he tells me each time I tell him how beautimous he is, I'll let you figure out which was which. LOVE the enthusiasm in your comments, Jan. Love you, CayCay

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