Fall Wind

Written: November 29, 2023 ______________________________________ nature's wild spirit autumn wind dances with glee~ papers soar and flee leaves dance in the air whispering countless secrets~ autumn's wild embrace

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Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 12/3/2023 11:03:00 AM

Good evening Sotto. Wonderful set of haiku. I love haiku poetry. This haiku you wrote are so well expressed. The Autumn dance is nearly touching its end for this year. But as you well said, the wild autumn's wind still blows many whispering secrets. I enjoyed reading it. Have a nice evening!

Valsa George

Date: 12/1/2023 4:36:00 AM

Such a lovely feel your haikus have given. I see the autumn winds dancing in the air and hear their whisperings of countless secrets. You have a Mida's touch, I must say, turning everything into gold.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/30/2023 5:28:00 AM

Very nice, nearly Winter…oh why rush it ;) Hugs ~ Kim

Paige Hind

Date: 11/29/2023 4:01:00 PM

Beautiful haikus! Nice imagery...

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/29/2023 3:39:00 PM

ooo! I like these Haikus, dear Sotto! You know I love nature and you've beautifully captured some rather unique things about autumn--papers soar and flee...so true. The line I like best, though, is 'whispering countless secrets.' My grandmother actually used to say something very similar to me about autumn. "Go outside," she'd say. "Tell your secrets to the autumn wind; it will whisk them away." I took great delight in reading your poem. Have to fave this one. Have a great evening, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/29/2023 12:16:00 PM

Wind brings winter. Thank you for this innovative haiku.

Silent One

Date: 11/29/2023 11:08:00 AM

Nature is so inspirational... we see something and turn it poetic.. so many times I am driving or walking and something always inspires verses in my head.. sadly too many times i dont get time or are in a position to write them.. Two wonderful haiku, both with their own unique imagery..

Ink Empress

Date: 11/29/2023 11:00:00 AM

I always feel nature in different ways do whisper so many secrets, if only we listen carefully theres so much to embrace and appreciate. I love these haiku. I especially love “ papers soar and flee” and “ autumns wild embrace” the second one flows even seamlessly … beautiful imagery. Pleasure always reading your poems. Whether long or short you do paint imagery in such eloquence