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Fall Tanka

Autumnal Poem (Tanka) (After a photo by Albert Russo) This rock in the sea Looks like a shipwrecked vessel In October sadness A ship manned by seagulls her captain, a tired seal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/22/2011 6:07:00 AM
This poem paints an interesting picture. A pleasing read. Thanks for sharing, JancarlC.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 8/23/2011 2:28:00 PM
thank you jancarl

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