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Fall Splendor
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
09/06/2023

              

Next to Spring, Fall is my favorite time; multicolored leaves confetti the ground. And Autumn’s splendid changes are sublime, I enjoy every color, smell, and sound. Wrapping Summer’s dead in a colored shroud, Autumn weaves tapestries not meant to last. Yet, using every color She’s allowed, Autumn’s artistic skills are unsurpassed. Gold, orange, and amber adorn the trees as green leaves morph into colorful art. Yet, mosaics crafted by a brisk breeze all get inevitably blown apart. The flowers have all died and gone to seed, awaiting the kiss of Spring to awake. And as an Autumn sunset starts to bleed, fog forms on the warm waters of the lake.

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Date: 10/3/2023 9:30:00 AM
Emile, you have captured the highs and the lows of autumn - the beautiful leaves and the passing of summer's life - in your wonderfully expressed poetic lines - "green leaves morph into colorful art." Congrats and high fives for your first place win! Blessings of fall beauty to you!
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Date: 10/1/2023 10:52:00 AM
I love all of this Emile. Your imagery is brilliant. The second stanza is especially pleasing to me. Congratulations my friend!
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Date: 10/1/2023 1:22:00 PM
Thanks, Linda, as always, I appreciate all your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/28/2023 11:13:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually behold fall splendor since my country is devoid of Fall. God bless you.
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Date: 9/29/2023 8:28:00 AM
Thanks, Beata; I am so pleased that I could bring a little glimpse of Fall into your life, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/28/2023 6:23:00 PM
Emile, a gorgeous colorful fall poem, wonderful imagery, congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 9/29/2023 8:26:00 AM
Thanks, Tania, I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/8/2023 2:41:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning. I really love the way you’ve written this autumnal poem, in such a poetic manner. All those colors and the imagery, especially “ as green leaves morph into colorful art” this is a fave for me
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/8/2023 9:01:00 AM
Thanks, Ink Empress; I appreciate your comments, you have made my day, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/6/2023 9:14:00 AM
your imagery and rhyme are just divine Emile:-) I think this poem will have great appeal to Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/6/2023 11:33:00 AM
Thanks, Jan; your wonderful comments have made my day, my friend, Emile.

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