Multicolored Leaves

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Autumn's annual changes are sublime; multicolored leaves confetti the ground. Next to Spring, Fall is my favorite time; I enjoy every color, smell, and sound. Wrapping Summer's dead in a colored shroud, breezes weave tapestries not meant to last. And using every color She's allowed, Autumn's artistic skills are unsurpassed. Gold, orange, and amber adorn the trees as green leaves morph into colorful art. Yet, mosaics crafted by each brisk breeze will inevitably be blown apart. The blossoms have withered and gone to seed, waiting for the kiss of Spring to awake. And as a scarlet sunset starts to bleed, Winter arrives on a tumbling snowflake.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/3/2023 9:30:00 AM

Emile, you have captured the highs and the lows of autumn - the beautiful leaves and the passing of summer's life - in your wonderfully expressed poetic lines - "green leaves morph into colorful art." Congrats and high fives for your first place win! Blessings of fall beauty to you!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/1/2023 10:52:00 AM

I love all of this Emile. Your imagery is brilliant. The second stanza is especially pleasing to me. Congratulations my friend!

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/1/2023 1:22:00 PM

Thanks, Linda, as always, I appreciate all your comments, my friend, Emile.

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/28/2023 11:13:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually behold fall splendor since my country is devoid of Fall. God bless you.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2023 8:28:00 AM

Thanks, Beata; I am so pleased that I could bring a little glimpse of Fall into your life, my friend, Emile.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/28/2023 6:23:00 PM

Emile, a gorgeous colorful fall poem, wonderful imagery, congratulations on your first place win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2023 8:26:00 AM

Thanks, Tania, I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/8/2023 2:41:00 AM

This is absolutely stunning. I really love the way you’ve written this autumnal poem, in such a poetic manner. All those colors and the imagery, especially “ as green leaves morph into colorful art” this is a fave for me

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/8/2023 9:01:00 AM

Thanks, Ink Empress; I appreciate your comments, you have made my day, my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2023 9:14:00 AM

your imagery and rhyme are just divine Emile:-) I think this poem will have great appeal to Tania:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/6/2023 11:33:00 AM

Thanks, Jan; your wonderful comments have made my day, my friend, Emile.