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Poetry/Rhyme/Fall Rhapsody
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1577-497-09
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written September 09, 2023
For the International Contest, Fall Splendor
Sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 09/28/2023

First Place

Free Fall Autumn photo and picture

Fall Rhapsody

 
"Every leaf speaks bliss to me, fluttering from an autumn tree." Quote by _ Emily Bronte All the trees are changing their summer gowns, the winds whispers- trees it is time to fall; and stained glass leaves drop in golds, reds, and browns, taking their time to fly they often crawl. And drifting are sweet bird rhapsody songs, the tweets, the chirps, twittering and the twangs; all of autumn is quiet and mellow, I am holding a leaf veined and yellow. The rain falls in a pitter-patter dance, there is a splendor in the scenery; and the leaves with a madness spin and prance, a beauty where once there was greenery. The wind is wailings like a violin, oh God has painted his beautiful art; all around painted leaves whirl, swirl and spin, his voice whispers in the trees and my heart.
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Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Fabulous imagery and your last line is a treasure dear Constance. I also like the "...pitter-patter dance..." Congratulations! :)
La France Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 11:46 AM
Linda, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulation, appreciate.
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September 29, 2023 at 3:13 PM
A lovely rhapsody of the fall, quote and picture too. Congratulations on your win in Tania’s contest… Belle
La France Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 10:09 PM
Belle, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations.
Agustin Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 11:11 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually behold fall splendor in my country devoid of Fall. God bless you.
La France Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Beata, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, and comment, blessings.
Kitchin Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 6:17 PM
Constance, a beautiful poem, love the fall imagery, congratulations on your first place win!
La France Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Tania, thank you for the contest, the compliment and the congratulations.
Bowring Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 10:39 PM
Dear Constance this is simply divine. So, so beautiful and creative. You have depicted the scene, imagery, tremendously,’All the trees are changing their summer gowns’. Glorious! I’m faving this one as I love it so much. Good luck in the competition. Smiles to you. :):)
La France Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:38 PM
Christina, thank you so much for the compliments, the comment, FAV and encourgement.
George Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:13 AM
You have sucked in the whole splendour of autumn. It is the season I love best with its exotic colors and comforting breeze, interspersed by occasional rains. A great entry for the contest. All the Best dear Constance.
La France Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:14 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, and the encouragement.
Lane Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 5:02 PM
There really is splendor in the scenery you so skillfully describe, as well as in your chosen photo. Despite the falling leaves, Autumn is my favorite season and you have done it justice with this entry.
La France Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 8:55 AM
Lin, thank you so much for the lovely comment and compliment .
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