Fall Park

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fall park with emerald grass winding furrowed path . . . hidden birds tweet chirp and sing ancient brown barked trees lined up crumpled rotting fallen leaves . . . whispers of water hued leaves on the trees in foggy shades of pale green . . . squirrel resting on a branch _________________________ December 10, 2022 Poetry/Charlieku/Haiku/fall park Copyright Protected, ID 12-1507-866-10 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Triple New Charlieku sponsor, Charles Messina, Judged 01/04/2023 First Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2023 10:07:00 AM

I love how you did your set, Constance. One of my favorites on the list. Congrats for your win.

Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2023 6:10:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much for the visit, compliment, and congrats, Constance

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/5/2023 7:06:00 AM

So well done, Constance. Simply beautiful. Your win is well-deserved. Congratulations

Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2023 7:56:00 AM

Sotto, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and congratulations, Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/5/2023 3:56:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2023 7:57:00 AM

Sara, thank you so much for the visit, congratulations and comment, Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/4/2023 9:16:00 PM

"emerald grass", "whispers of water" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2023 7:57:00 AM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and congratulations, Constance

Charles Messina

Date: 1/4/2023 8:01:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful and one of my fav's in the contest, Constance. Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year! Charlie

Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2023 7:59:00 AM

Charlie, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and my wonderful placement, and the compliment, FAV, and congratulations, appreciate, blessings for 2023, Constance