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Fall Haiku

rustling of relics
impressive leaves falling with
opalescent hues

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/13/2025 4:33:00 PM

Nice Fall Haiku, Kim. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2025 6:30:00 PM

Thank you! Same to you, my friend!

Valsa George

Date: 8/13/2025 12:18:00 AM

Rustling leaves of 'opalescent hues'...lovely to the eyes and sweet to the ears. A lovely haiku.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2025 5:40:00 AM

So glad you think so. I was so happy the way this one came together! Thank you, my sweet friend!

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 8/12/2025 9:46:00 AM

A very interesting and novel first line to a haiku, Kim. / Maurice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2025 5:40:00 AM

I so appreciate your comment, dear friend!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/11/2025 4:23:00 PM

outstanding imagery in just three lines...vivid enough that I am imagining autumn... :-) enjoy your evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2025 4:58:00 PM

Makes me happy! Thank you!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/11/2025 3:34:00 PM

now you know how much I enjoy haiku Kim lovely one here hugs Shadow

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2025 4:57:00 PM

Thanks so much, Shadow!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/11/2025 2:35:00 PM

What a lovely Haiku write you have here. Love It... Few words with much said. Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2025 3:04:00 PM

Thank you, dear poet! Hugs ~ Kim

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/11/2025 12:27:00 PM

Dear Kim, impressive beauty in decay and change. I found it to be peaceful, reflective, and quietly powerful all at once. It made me want to step outside, listen, and see those colors for myself. Such a delicate snapshot of fall’s magic. It’s a lovely to savor those moments before they slip away. Blessings, Dear Kim, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2025 3:06:00 PM

Every blue moon I feel satisfied with my haiku :) Thank you, dear Daniel! Blessings your way!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/11/2025 7:27:00 AM

love that we have both colour and sound of autumn here ~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2025 3:06:00 PM

Thank you for noticing, Line! I appreciate you xx

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/11/2025 4:50:00 AM

Beautiful!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2025 7:09:00 AM

Thank you, Abdullah!

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/11/2025 4:14:00 AM

Very nice, Kim; I love fall. Have great writing day! Oops! -- be careful what I say...I love autumn at my age. No fall!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2025 7:10:00 AM

LOL! Right!? Thank you!

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/11/2025 2:41:00 AM

delicious and musical, touching images, thanks poet Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/11/2025 7:11:00 AM

Thank you so much, Yann! :)

Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/10/2025 8:14:00 PM

Kim, this haiku is gorgeous in its simplicity. ??The phrase “rustling of relics” feels so fresh and evocative—it gives the leaves both history and beauty, while “opalescent hues” paints them with a jewel-like glow. A perfect autumn moment captured in three lines.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2025 8:29:00 PM

I appreciate your comment, Rowena! Thank you! Hugs ~ Kim