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Fall Flowers

I did not see them wither they fell between the light, falling back into a darkening sun The blooms have slipped sideways the way dust does when not tied down. I did not see their passing, I only saw the knuckled joints, of dry stems. I smelt burnt offerings arranged into bouquets for long dead brides.

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Date: 3/10/2022 3:31:00 PM
Another fascinating write, Eric. Lots to think about here, a metaphor methinks for those who slip quietly into the beyond without notice.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 5/3/2022 8:27:00 AM
Good to get feedback on this. Thanlks L Milton.

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