Fall Flowers

I did not see them wither
they fell between the light,
falling back into a darkening sun

The blooms have slipped sideways
the way dust does
when not tied down.

I did not see their passing,
I only saw the knuckled joints,
of dry stems.
I smelt burnt offerings
arranged into bouquets
for long dead brides.
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Hankins Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 3:31 PM
Another fascinating write, Eric. Lots to think about here, a metaphor methinks for those who slip quietly into the beyond without notice.
Ashford Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 8:27 AM
Good to get feedback on this. Thanlks L Milton.
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