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Fall Dance

Fall Dance The leaves dance Across the lawn At an Autumn pace Race with the wind In cadence with time… Nov. 1, 2020

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/10/2020 5:59:00 AM

Hi Susan, Merry Christmaa almost, eh? Loved your perfect description of Fall. Panagiota xx

Susan Jeavons
Date: 12/10/2020 10:50:00 AM

Yes, almost Christmas! Thank you for your kind words. Christmas blessings to you. Susan Maree xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2020 9:23:00 AM

Good one. The beauty is wonderful but only for a short season. When it rains they get weighted down with grief. Sara

Susan Jeavons
Date: 12/2/2020 9:26:00 AM

yes they sure do! Or snow as we have right now. Thank you Sara. Blessings, Susan Maree

Michael Tor

Date: 11/6/2020 5:19:00 PM

Nicely written Susan hope you are well.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/30/2020 4:57:00 AM

..I have no idea how I missed your comment How odd! Take care.PANGIE XX

Silent One

Date: 11/2/2020 8:06:00 AM

lovely words...

Susan Jeavons
Date: 11/2/2020 8:24:00 AM

Thank you Silent One. Bless you, Susan Maree