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In New Haven, Lisa misses the sad, dark, city aesthetics of her hometown. Its crime podcast vibe, actinic crime-lighting and sirens in the distance, that lull her to sleep like lullabies. She has a disturbingly romantic attraction to hustle, bright neon lights, skyscrapers, subways, crowded diversity and swirling dance clubs. Yep, we were in NYC for fall break - a week-long escape from school. We head back to Yale tomorrow. We’ve been seeing the sights, Broadway shows at night, the views from great heights, restaurant delights and sisterly fights. Lisa's sister (Leeza, 14) can’t sit still, she’s all theater kid energy. She started playing electric bass and desperately wants to be in a band. She’s taking bass lessons, has calluses on her little fingers, and plays it (silently) even as we watch TV. Calling it an obsession would minimize it. We saw the Eras Tour movie, last night, in iMax and it’s hypnotizing. Better than RL? Maybe. We’ve seen two Broadway shows too: “Six’, a modern retelling of the lives of the six wives of Henry VIII (don’t bother) and ‘Merrily We Roll Along’, (two thumbs up) Stephen Sondheim’s weakest play saved by the cast of Harry Potter (Daniel Radcliffe), and King George (Jonathan Groff). Lisa, Leeza and I were talking, earlier in the week, about Autumn comfort foods. I described the joys of cassoulet, fondues and tartiflette (a potatoes, cream, cheese, bacon, and onions delight) - three French favorites and Leeza said, snootily, “This is New York City,” like, ‘you can find anything here.’ It was a freakin’ challenge! So, we’ve hit French restaurants all week in search of these treats. We each order one of the three and compare them. So far, La Sirene (south village) had the best cassoulet - although it had a crusty top - which is just - No. Mominette (Brooklyn) had the best Tartiflette but they all treat it like a side dish?? And The Lavaux wins best fondue. So book those flights now! Lisa, Leeza and I were sharing the couch in their dad’s all-glass, 50th floor, corner study, that overlooks the city. The view makes me feel like an angel watching over mankind from the firmaments - if the firmaments feature the winking, blinking lights of jets landing at Newark Liberty, Teterboro and LaGuardia. “So, how’s Fall semester been for you?” Lisa asked me. Of course, we’re roommates so she’s seen the more obvious events in my life, but we all have complicated, internal lives. The subtext to her question, of course, is Peter and how I’m dealing with his absence, so far, this year. But I’m not ready to go there yet and I frown. “I’ve been seeing so many Tumbler compilations, she added, to save me from answering, “saying how the start of Fall Semester is a time of agony, pain and reflection.” “And I think that’s real,” I interjected. “How so?” Leeza asked - she LOVES uni 411 “School can be harsh,” Lisa continued, “the sudden, hella work, and, of course, it’s breakup season on campus.” “Oh, Yeah,” I agreed, “Being away from home and those certain ‘someone's’ for months can be rough on freshmen.” We all nodded in agreement. “Has anyone been vibing to anything regularly?” I asked (musically). “I’ve been bumpin’ to Pink Pantheress,” Leeza revealed, “I think people see her as a TikTok, one hit wonder, but I think she still slaps!” “Yes!” Lisa exclaims, “I’ve had “Picture in my mind” on a loop. The city looked like an exquisite, miniature, clockwork toy. How could someone not love it when seeing it the way God does? It’ll be even prettier at Thanksgiving - I'm crossing my fingers and hoping it snows.

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Date: 10/23/2023 10:57:00 PM
I quite enjoyed!
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Date: 10/22/2023 1:11:00 PM
I remember being in Manhattan when superstorm Sandy hit in 2012, the crane atop (One57) toppled and dangled over the side of the building, they had to evacuate all the surrounding area for fear it might collapse, leave it to me to visit NY just as a superstorm hit, still no snow sorry! Cheers David
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Date: 10/22/2023 2:33:00 PM
That kind of long range weather science I always take with a pinch of salt, but science of the here and now is definitely more accurate! if not totally trustworthy!
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Anais Vionet
Date: 10/22/2023 2:20:00 PM
I read somewhere that winter will be mild - but do we HAVE to trust science?
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Date: 10/22/2023 2:01:00 PM
I read somewhere that winter will be mild - but do we HAVE to trust science?
Date: 10/22/2023 9:37:00 AM
Perhaps you are writing from the firmament of angels Anais, NY is indeed a spectacle to behold especially at nighttime, I’ve seen it for myself many times, but not from a 50th floor all glass corner study, I’m guessing it’s one of them tall narrow skyscrapers you mentioned before up near Central Park, not too far from hit and miss broadway, I like the way you want to make it all even better with some snow, ambitious enjoyable writing, cheers David
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Anais Vionet
Date: 10/22/2023 11:43:00 AM
Yes! That’s exactly right. Lincoln center is dead-center of that corner and if we hail a taxi, whirl around Columbus circle, we can be in our Broadway seats 15 minutes from calling the elevator.
Date: 10/22/2023 2:30:00 AM
Great storytelling Anais..
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Anais Vionet
Date: 10/22/2023 7:00:00 AM
thank you!

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