Fall .

Autumn Summer's farewell Harvesting the bounty Preparing for Winter's anger Saved . Having been tagged by Dane Ann , I now hand the baton to Brian Strand , to continue this Cinquain sequence .

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David Byrne

Date: 2/8/2010 6:37:00 PM

Winters anger-I like that!

Brian Strand

Date: 2/6/2010 2:09:00 AM

This affair was indeed a bridge too far for Fabio ,Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Brian Strand

Date: 10/29/2009 1:14:00 AM

Very poetic blog comment Sean (one to post !)Rgds Brian

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/8/2009 1:03:00 AM

excellent work

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/1/2009 6:57:00 AM

Hi Sean - excellent use of this form and an excellent choice of who to follow it up - God Bless, YF4L, mj

Brian Strand

Date: 10/1/2009 12:13:00 AM

Finally emptied in all my rainwater butts,its been so dry here since beginning of August.They say in the last 100 years 30 Setembers thereof have been warmer than June.Certainly true this year.Have a good day Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Donna Golden

Date: 9/30/2009 1:54:00 PM

Lovely tribute to my favorite season, Sean! Hugs, Donna P.S...I've missed your footles!

Elaine George

Date: 9/30/2009 9:56:00 AM

EXACTLY! Great Cinquain, dear Sean. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 9/26/2009 8:06:00 AM

What is it that makes me think politicians only pay lip service to democracy.Now if there were a tie...Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Farah Chamma

Date: 9/24/2009 7:16:00 AM

That's one great write..."Winter's anger" is a shrewd expression... Thank you for your comments... Always, Farah

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/23/2009 9:22:00 AM

Sean, I only write footles to get your response..they are always hilarious. BG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/18/2009 11:56:00 PM

Hi Sean, This is a beautiful poem. Where have you been? Smiles, Dane Ann

Brian Strand

Date: 9/16/2009 12:20:00 AM

Thanks for your welcome comments today Sean Enjoy the late summer sun.Rgds Brian

Brian Strand

Date: 9/13/2009 12:53:00 AM

I see your men are back on song this week Sean.Enjoy the sunshine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Date: 9/10/2009 3:35:00 PM

Interesting perspective on the upcoming season. Hope the winter isn't too angry this year. We had enough snow to last us for two years last year. Nice use of personification in this poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/9/2009 4:06:00 PM

My Dear Mr. Kelly, this is lovely but I feel like I came in at the middle of the movie, so to speak. I have missed a lot! I have much catching up to do and will be investigating this "tagged" sequence! Thank you for the Royal welcome. The castle flag is flying high! With love from the palace, QR

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/9/2009 12:34:00 PM

Excellent work, nice visual...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 9/9/2009 9:23:00 AM

Than you for your comments Sean,hopefully England will do so this eveing as well.Rgds Brian

Brian Strand

Date: 9/9/2009 9:11:00 AM

Nice one Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/9/2009 9:00:00 AM

Good job...I especially love "Preparing for winter's anger"...BG

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/9/2009 7:29:00 AM

Beautiful..poised.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/9/2009 6:25:00 AM

Nice job, Sean. This is cute. I always think of squirrels when I think of autumn. I guess it's because of they are save-ed from winter hunger by their autumn labors. Reading your cinquain today has been a pleasure. Thank you for accepting the challenge. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/9/2009 5:52:00 AM

Very well done, Sean. You capture the transition of seasons beautifully in your cinquaiin! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2009 4:20:00 AM

Interesting description of fall. Every line adds its own flavor. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2009 4:04:00 AM

Fantastic Sean. I agree with your Cinquain. Thank you for continuing the challenge. Love, Carol