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Fall

I fling myself into fall when all is ablaze from dawn into each dusk of autumn’s splendid days. The mountains are a sea of brightly bedazzled trees - crimson, gold and russet leaves caressed by cool breeze. I’m awash with wonder from colors I behold. So precious are the beauties this season’s months unfold. Wind waltzes through the forest; in the glade I twirl as glorious torched leaves, aflutter, round me whirl. I succumb to autumn’s each and every flavor - from asters when they bloom to sunsets I savor. Those Indian summer days sweetly come and go. Chill nights I watch entranced as sky turns indigo.

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Date: 10/1/2023 10:21:00 AM
Lovely rhyming Andrea. Each stanza a beauty of its own. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/29/2023 2:09:00 PM
Andrea, a beautiful fall poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 9/29/2023 10:06:00 AM
Well penned. Beauty of fall season so vividly described. Congrats on win.
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Date: 9/13/2023 11:58:00 AM
Beautiful poem! Very enjoyed read! Have a nice season with best wishes!, AA
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Date: 9/13/2023 8:09:00 AM
Dazzling in colors and beauty of fall--splendid write, Andrea.
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Date: 9/13/2023 7:32:00 AM
"The mountains are a sea of brightly bedazzled trees" Ah, this is such a resplendent and beautifully autumn-hued write that reflects a sense of serenity that you've depicted as being associated with the fall season. I'm absolutely in awe of the gorgeous descriptions and especially those different colours of leaves.. "Those Indian summer days sweetly come and go." That was really lovely and I truly love the overall rhythmic flow of this piece.. Wonderfully done :)
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