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fall's first frost next day vegetation brown.... pink rain lily blooms

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Date: 10/24/2022 9:21:00 AM
Hello Sara. This is lovely and so true of nature and seasons. The execution is well done and true to the voice and tone also. Thank you for sharing.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/24/2022 1:49:00 PM
Lisa, Thank you for the kind review of my work. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Date: 10/24/2022 8:16:00 AM
i bet it looked awesome!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/24/2022 1:24:00 PM
'Twas awesome to see the little rain lily tucked away under some brown foliage where it was protected. Today a butterfly was trying to get some nectar from it but I kind of think it was hopeless because it is so dry here. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 10/22/2022 7:21:00 PM
Absolutely stunning imagery, Sara. Thank you for sharing!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/23/2022 6:05:00 AM
You are quite welcome, Kyle. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 10/22/2022 10:33:00 AM
Wow! Great imagery. Well done.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/22/2022 1:52:00 PM
Victor, your visit is just what I needed today. Thank you for dropping by. Sara
Date: 10/22/2022 7:11:00 AM
Great haiku, Sara. You conveyed a stunning picture of the frost and the decaying vegetation. Blessings dear friend.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/22/2022 1:49:00 PM
Lasaad, why, thank you. Sara

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