Premiere Contest WinnerFairy-floss Fireflies


She's a halo of hope,
fulfilled by fireflies, shedding her soul in sage seas ~
stars elope...

roaring wolf rife,
a forest flutter of rose seeds ~
she's life...

heart stirs 
fairy floss dreams,
b l u r s

she's a halo of hope,
a forest flutter of rose seeds ~
blurs... 
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Bagchi Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 6:57 PM
Different- good expression! Cheers! RB
Croft Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 6:22 AM
Congratulations!! Beautiful poem
Seeker Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 6:41 PM
Warmest congratulations on POTD, as well as the trophy win, Hiya, well deserved, an outstanding write, with vivid description and alliteration thrown in, in this compact and complex form, superb!
Famuyiwa Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations on your win.
Fowler Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 10:35 AM
Back with congratulations on your contest win Hiya! :)
George Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 11:01 PM
Hi sweet Hiya, with your reappearance, I see you once again stealing the show. Hearty Congratulations young girl on your Minichu being chosen as Poem of the day. Also huge congratulations on being the winner of the prestigious trophy.
Jones Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 8:17 PM
Congratulations on your top win!!!
Empress Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 3:43 AM
Congratulations, star!! Well deserved! Pleased to see you back
mysore Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 2:57 AM
Congratulations on your 'minichu' contest win dear poet. Cheers.
Kauffman Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 8:21 PM
Hiya, so delicate this fairy eloquence!" It's like finding a fairy castle in the forest! Congratulations on your POTD! So wonderful to read your poetic delicacies again. Blessings!
Hind Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 4:19 PM
So beautiful! I am late, but congrats on POTD!
Beaufort Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 5:24 AM
Hiya, Ahhh a halo...what a beautiful way to describe this sentiment. Hope is a wonderful thing! Smiles and congratulations!!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 3:22 AM
My heartfelt congratulations on your lovely POTD
Nicole Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 6:18 PM
' She's a halo of hope. ' I like this thought very much, Hiya. So light and carefree, along with inspiring and uplifting. This beautiful in every way, my sweet friend. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Baker Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 2:09 PM
Congratulations on your lovely POTD, Hiya! Enjoy your special day of recognition my friend. A poet friend in Texas Bill
Edmonds  Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 1:13 PM
Lovely Hiya, congratulations on your poem of the day award… Beryl
La France Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 11:34 AM
Hiya, beautiful, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
Fowler Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 8:06 AM
Light, gentle minichu Hiya. Congratulations on POTD! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 7:52 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a lovely write. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.......................
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 6:30 AM
Gorgeous poetry. Congratulations on POTD! Enjoy your day. xomo
Canerdy Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 6:07 AM
Hiya, this is magical! CONGRATS on your well-deserved honor! Janice
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 5:41 AM
This is awesome. Worth reading multiple times! Congratulations :)
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 5:41 AM
This is awesome. Worth reading multiple times! Congratulations :)
Jones Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 5:39 AM
Lovely imagery from your potd! Congratulations!
Cunningham Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 5:21 AM
Congratulations to you Hiya on today's POTD honour. Tom
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