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Fading Anguish

Forced down onto the thick mud the stench of this rotten blood Determined for this to be surreal My fate would change if it were real My life begins anew In my head From the time mother put me to bed Father took me to my first Yankee’s game Where I was inspired by their fame To keep the kids soundly in bed My blood, I fear, I must shed Not knowing whether I would live or die the anguish is consuming my thigh The pain is slowly dying out my destiny is nothing but a doubt Laying on the red infested loam Guadalcanal, you are my last home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/3/2013 6:10:00 AM
hello, George , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/3/2013 2:44:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Jorge ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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