Fading

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Her delicate form captured by her love of dance. Emerging from the essence of romance. The ravishing beauty played music to delight and warm. Captured by her love of dance, her delicate form. Sweeping her wispy guise through the light, Performing her flawless dance for pleasure and delight. Always practicing for her aspirations to realize. Through the light, sweeping her wispy guise. Intricate and expressive, dancing as well as she should. Incorporating Pirouettes into her dance as she could. He saw her one day. her amazing dancing , so impressive. Dancing as well as she should, intricate and expressive. As he approached her, he beckoned he meant no harm. She magically hypnotized him with her magnetic charm. Besotted with overwhelming thoughts he couldn't deter, He beckoned he meant no harm, as he approached her. With passion in the air, the pair fell in love that day. His love for her was strong and always on display. They became a union and they danced everywhere. The pair fell in love that day, with passion in the air. No more did they dance as their love was fading. With each year, fears and doubts came cascading The end of their union, the end of all romance As their love was fading, No more did they dance.

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Constance La France

Date: 10/9/2023 2:38:00 PM

Speaks, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like your image, Constance

Speaks Volumes
Date: 10/19/2023 10:51:00 PM

Thanks so much Constance. I have been so busy, am just now getting around to replying.

Jay Narain

Date: 9/21/2023 12:03:00 PM

Nice poem. Romantic with sad ending.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/21/2023 1:07:00 PM

Yes it happens so often unfortunately. Thanks for reading and commenting Jay my friend.

Tom Woody

Date: 9/21/2023 9:29:00 AM

Yay! I get to be first to comment. This was so magical and romantic till the last stanza. How sad but happens to so many relationships, doesn't it. Very well written

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/24/2023 4:10:00 PM

Exactly reminiscent of the others Tom. True colors are resplendent. Cheers SV :) All doubts faded away.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/21/2023 1:15:00 PM

I didn't want to spend too much of the poem on the "fallout/ break up" Tom, but you are right it happens often these days. We live in a world where if its broken don't try to fix it, just throw it away and get a new one. Thanks for your comment .