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Faded Painting

Faded Painting From the moment that first we met, I dipped my brushes to keep them wet. I filled a large canvas with you and me. I created the painting I wanted to see. But I didn't paint a clear sky of blue. Not even when our love was new. I couldn't fill in a calm turquoise sea Because we were living in a fantasy. I wanted to think our love was real But there was something I could feel. Something wrong that I could sense, So upon my canvas I painted a fence. Each of us stood on an opposite side. We knew we had something to hide. I confessed my secret before too long. You remained silent; that was wrong. The fence grew much taller after we wed. I painted a broken heart in deepest red. Stained by tears, was my canvas of sorrows. Smeared like my dreams of our tomorrows. One day I painted us out of the scene. Fairytale ended with strokes of dark green. An abstract of colors I hurled at my art. Palette in one hand; in the other my heart. My life is shadowed. I am void of all feeling. The canvas is stored, now cracked and peeling. A faded painting in memory of you and me. A canvas of a love that became a travesty.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/21/2015 9:40:00 AM
Nicely written with a knowledge of art, but I hope it's only fiction. In reading a few of your other poems, I see you are a reflective person capable of expressing yourself quite well. Merci for stopping by. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/21/2015 9:53:00 AM
Hi, Maurice. Only parts of this are fiction. I appreciate your kind words. Merci beaucoup for reading some of my other poems. ~ Lin ~ I sent you soup mail.
Date: 10/21/2015 9:30:00 AM
You are very good with your imagery and rhymes, Lin. A series of powerfully sad images you have painted with your words. 7. Keep penning! hugs!
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/21/2015 9:50:00 AM
I am delighted that you're enjoying the imagery in my poems, and in your score! Thanks for the hugs, Kim. I'm a hugger, too!
Date: 10/20/2015 9:54:00 AM
A super 7 and adding this jewel to my fav list. A pleasure to read this poem this morn. Thanks
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Date: 10/20/2015 10:23:00 AM
How nice to hear that it's going on your fav list, and thanks for the 7, Robert. It's so encouraging to read positive comments like this one.

Book: Shattered Sighs